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{just trying to get ma wits about be folks, feel free to continue Freds ordeal kk?}


I knew
this guy
his name
was Fred
who lived
down by
the rivers
ledge
One night
up state
poured down
some rains
and Fred
was never
seen again

2007-10-22 14:15:01 · 11 answers · asked by ? 3 in Arts & Humanities Poetry

11 answers

Poor Fred!!!!! Hey your poems are really cool.... Keep up the good work. :)

2007-10-22 14:45:32 · answer #1 · answered by Puerto Rican-Chick 2 · 1 0

OMG
Where Fred went
is anyone's guess.
from the force of the wind and
the rain I feel that it knocked Fred
in the river. My question was why was he
so close. Another possibility would be
he disappeared along with the current
after all the current can pull even the strongest swimmer in the water.

2007-10-22 22:07:14 · answer #2 · answered by sweet_blue 7 · 1 0

The problem
lay in
Fred's poor
Feet.
The smell
from them
was not
so sweet.
That night
Fred ate
and so
was fed.
His big
old boots
were made
of lead.
The water
rose and
Fred went
down.
Poor old
Fred just
had to
drown.
Poor old
lost and
lonely
Fred.
on the river
bottom
cold and
dead.

2007-10-22 22:17:53 · answer #3 · answered by Dondi 7 · 2 0

Poor old
Fred walked
back to town,
took a cab
to the airport
and flew to
Tahiti.
Poor old
Fred is
sucking down
pina coladas
on the
beach.

2007-10-23 12:51:44 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 1 0

I'm lost in dread
but I instead
take to paper and pen
an ode to write
on this same night
I think old Fred is dead.

2007-10-22 22:26:08 · answer #5 · answered by autumlovr 7 · 1 0

Fred probably fell in the river and the alligators ate him and it gave them integestion, and now they are all constapated.

2007-10-22 21:43:04 · answer #6 · answered by Always ready for anything 5 · 1 0

He stole Santa Claus' Rudolph and rode off on the rain, dear.

2007-10-22 22:25:50 · answer #7 · answered by dogge 2 · 1 0

MayBE the rains got SOo bad that it swept away the man & possible a VAN that he lived out of down by the river !?! lol I'll bet it happend one SATUDAY NIGHT too !?! lol get it ? ;-D

2007-10-23 00:13:13 · answer #8 · answered by ? 5 · 1 0

Poor old Fred
was filled with dread
He put a gun
right to his head...

2007-10-23 07:29:30 · answer #9 · answered by Jaimee 3 · 1 0

k so he drowned in tat river wich took him 2 another lost world!

2007-10-23 03:52:42 · answer #10 · answered by aditi 3 · 1 0

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