elmira,
The greatest prize sometimes carries with it the greatest risk and even greater sacrifice.
Elmira, with this ring, I give you the greatest love I could possibly give if you're willing to take the chance;
with this ring, I ask you not only of forgiveness but also forgetfulness;
with this ring is a promise to love and care for you for as long as I live;
with this ring is a lifelong commitment towards a beautiful goal;
but most importantly, with this ring, lies my hope of happilly ever after.
I love you with all of my heart.
Elmira will you be my wife, will you marry me?
2007-10-22 05:17:59 · 13 answers · asked by rj serna 1 in Family & Relationships ➔ Marriage & Divorce
You're kidding, right?!
It isn't a sacrifice to marry this woman, nor is she a freaking prize to be won.
What's with the forgiveness and forgetfulness? That's just awkward.
"Beautiful goal?" Try "lifelong commitment of love,devotion, and friendship."
2007-10-22 05:25:13 · answer #1 · answered by tamitofu1930 3 · 1⤊ 2⤋
If I wasn't already married , I would marry you. Any man that was thoughtful enough to make up a poem like that is a wonderful prize his self.
2007-10-22 12:31:10 · answer #2 · answered by lovely 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
These are great except I dont like the "forgetfulness" part of this one...with this ring, I ask you not only of forgiveness but also forgetfulness;
2007-10-22 12:22:43 · answer #3 · answered by Twiggy 3 · 1⤊ 1⤋
It's not the elegance of the poetry, it's the feeling that produces it. Better to be honest and say what you mean than be fancy and sound artificial.
2007-10-22 12:21:34 · answer #4 · answered by John R 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
That's thoughtful and beautiful. She would like it ;-) I hope you two will have a wonderful life together where things are new and fresh literally and non-literally.
2007-10-22 12:35:09 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
I'm not crazy about the forgiveness and forgetfulness and the prize and sacrifice part but everyone is different you say what you believe is suited for her
good luck
2007-10-22 13:20:00 · answer #6 · answered by just me 4 · 0⤊ 3⤋
Don't like the first line at all.
Don't like the forgetfullness.
The rest sounds good.
2007-10-22 12:29:12 · answer #7 · answered by LAL 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
That is the most beautiful thing i've ever heard! Don't change a thing!
2007-10-22 12:22:15 · answer #8 · answered by Jane D 2 · 1⤊ 1⤋
Omg this is Beautiful.
Don't change a thing- Your not even talking to me && I got teary-eyed! :]
Aw, Lucky Girl <3
2007-10-22 12:23:37 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 1⤋
no need to edit, just be true with this vow, that is the most important than any sweet coated words....
2007-10-22 12:23:16 · answer #10 · answered by G_Lahcim 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋