artistic types???!!!?

Question

lol, it worked!! for all of you artistic types like myself, tell me how this sounds for a music vid:
a girl, lays in her bed awake, and there is a crescent moon outside. she gets up, ignoring the robe and slippers there. she walks past her parents' room, where, on one side, there are several jars of pills, some empty, some with pills spilling out, and the other side, there are beer cans, most empty
she walks outside, towards the woods. she is walking in her bare feet, all the trees around her dead. it fades to an antique filter, to her memories. She is blindfolded, being led by a brown hair, blue eyed boy, and she is clinging to him with each step.
It goes back to her, walking alone. She is carefully taking each step, almost trying to re-create the memory. The antique; they approach a clearing, surrounded by trees. (like the nitemare before xmas) He gets behind her, and takes off the blindfold, and it falls. The camera switches to a ankle/foot shot of her [next]

and the cloth lands in front of her feet. She is amazed, and starts to move around. He pulls her closely, [almost in a dance movement] and their lips move together slowly, just as they are about to kiss.
The girl is walking alone again, lost in her thoughts. Her toes are tuning blue. She is almost hopping with each step.
She gets to the secret space, only to realize that there is “crime scene, do not cross” tape around the secret space. She comes to the reality that he is dead, and that the memory was just that, a memory.
So she goes back to his house, and finds a music box with her name on it.
it plays "you are my sunshine" [in notes, with no words] up to where it says "you make me happy when skies are grey" she is cranking it slowly, a single tear falls from her face.
then his parents walk in, and she gets shocked, and drops the box. it breaks, and as she leaves, it plays the rest on it's own, very slowly and distorted. "you are my sunshine, my only sunshine-- [next]

"you are my sunshine, my only sunshine, please don't take my sunshine away…"

btw- i know it sucks in in 8th grade

Answer 1

I actually like that concept. I think, if done properly, it can be captivating. You have a good idea there. In fact, I can imagine it all happening, you gave such good visuals. It would be great to maybe one day actually see it.

Answer 2

maybe seek for Shakespearean names and spot if something on those lists would artwork for the two mothers and dads? a lot of those would desire to be seen artsy and earthy. Adriana, Bianca, Viola... Orlando, Sebastian, Lorenzo...

Answer 3

this is a music video? what song? and how if it is a song how can it play my only sunshine if there is other music playing? besides that its fantastic i would love to see it some day