a poem writtin in 5 minutes to express the words in my heart...?

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a poem writtin in 5 minutes to express the words in my heart...?

i wont wait forever
your not worth my tears
why dont you say it to my face
i just go by what i hear

you know i want to be yours
but i cant just sit and wait around
i know i have to move on
when romeo is no where to be found

i guess you never really loved me in the first place
i have to get over you
your not the only boy in this world
but i just dont know what to do

by audrey o'maille

do you like it?

2007-10-21 11:11:12 · 2 answers · asked by Audrey♥ 2 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry

2 answers

i like it.good

2007-10-21 20:26:01 · answer #1 · answered by ram 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋

pretty cool defiant tone. keep writing

2007-10-23 01:54:51 · answer #2 · answered by ari-pup 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋