PLEASE CRITIQUE A piece I wrote about Love, Bereavement, Friendship to be submitted for publication?

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PLEASE CRITIQUE A piece I wrote about Love, Bereavement, Friendship to be submitted for publication?

Very grateful if you would cast your eye over this short piece of writing I have labored over. It explores unrequited love and bereavement and ultimately, friendship ....
Here is the link to the piece:
http://meanderingtrevor.blogspot.com/2007/08/this-is-love-kiddo.html

it is prose not a poem

2007-10-21 01:45:28 · 2 answers · asked by Anonymous in Social Science ➔ Sociology

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I'll just say : beautiful and so very touching

2007-10-21 01:57:54 · answer #1 · answered by Willow 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋

Not a bad read. Covers a lot of ground in a short space. A bit flowery and convoluted for my taste but fine.

2007-10-21 01:51:35 · answer #2 · answered by chris n 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋