my 20th best i think out of the 27 poems i have what is your opinion?

Question

heart ice

Frozen and dry,
Tears spot my face,

The well where my tears were kept,
Has long since been swept,

No more emotion,
Threatens to plug up my heart,

For it has stopped beating,
Right from the start ,

Get the heat lamp,
And panic as you please,

But my frozen waterfall,
Has already flowed right into me,

Its freezing,
Making a nice grave,
That surely suits me,

Im hidden here,
Away from the breeze,

Where the warm notes never flow,
Never to unfreeze me,

I like it this way,
I do as i please,

Layers and layers,
Of every emotion,

Stands still on top,
Of my nicley frozen heart rock,

From now on,
My tempature will drop,

Not even a rock could dent this sheild,
as it is made from the saddness i no longer wield .

Answer 1

it is quite deep and elicits closer examination. just wondering why one stanza has three lines unlike the others. think about it.

Answer 2

VERY EMOTIONAL! excellent poem. unbelievable. 10/10 no doubt