How can i start my composition other than " once upon a time "
or " In a suny day ".......etc
i want something new
2007-10-20 03:32:55 · 27 answers · asked by Anonymous in Education & Reference ➔ Homework Help
"I never knew it would happen until that day...."
2007-10-20 03:41:42 · answer #1 · answered by torontoguy23 4 · 2⤊ 1⤋
Well all at once I came across a donkey which certainly behaved quite similar to what I had in mind, now on looking constantly towards I forgot what I had in my mind, my liking towards the donkey made me so involved that after some time I saw that I was no longer me but imitiating my new friend. Later in the night it came to my mind, after all he/she was also the creation of the same Almighty who blessed me with the reward of bieng a human.
2007-10-20 10:48:16 · answer #2 · answered by sgog 2 · 1⤊ 1⤋
Here's some:
-As the day dawned on September 5, 1874...
-The swaying bristles of grass glistened upon the daylight of Kentucky....
-The flowers aromatic pleasures poured the atmosphere with fresh beauty...
Hope this helps!
2007-10-20 10:37:07 · answer #3 · answered by ♥Choco-Mocha♥ 2 · 3⤊ 0⤋
-once upon a dreary day.
-On a day that would go down in history, an event so big that no one could forget, went down. (happened) or (took place)
- No one could have forseen what was about to unfold right before their eyes...
- It started of as a normal day on/in/at ________, but it didnt end that way
hope these help!!!
2007-10-20 10:44:27 · answer #4 · answered by ? 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
How about trying something dramatic, like As the storm approached, Fleeing from ferocious guard dogs, As I fell from the ladder, etc etc. Just a thought.
2007-10-20 10:38:40 · answer #5 · answered by Brady L 1 · 3⤊ 0⤋
If this is fiction, it's always safe to start with a "hook"-- something that makes the reader say "What?!?!" or want to know more.
My two favorite hooks are:
"It was the best of times, it was the worst of times."
and
"The last camel died at noon."
Both make the reader highly curious and read onward.
2007-10-20 10:44:35 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 2⤊ 0⤋
For a story?
Start with a conversation (Dialogue) or just into a middle of a scene.
Go to storywrite.com and read some stories there to help you get an idea.
2007-10-20 10:35:48 · answer #7 · answered by Buried.x.Heart 2 · 4⤊ 1⤋
you could maybe start with a description of a setting or of a person. like.......... The frost that day was like diamonds on the long grass.
2007-10-20 10:38:04 · answer #8 · answered by ms sensible 3 · 3⤊ 0⤋
Walking around during dark lonely night.
or sumthin like that
2007-10-20 10:43:14 · answer #9 · answered by GIR 3 · 1⤊ 1⤋
In a day that time forgot, There was a girl
2007-10-20 10:35:01 · answer #10 · answered by Chaotic Melody 3 · 7⤊ 0⤋
How about; During a dark snowing evening....
2007-10-20 10:36:59 · answer #11 · answered by dumb 6 · 1⤊ 1⤋