i've been hooked on it for quite a time now so can you please show me some of your tainted works so i can see if i'm doing mine right?
tnx...
2007-10-20 02:23:06 · 6 answers · asked by Karnival Kid 3 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
Search out Georg Trakl. His work is some of the darkest I've read.
2007-10-20 07:21:50 · answer #1 · answered by Dancing Bee 6 · 3⤊ 0⤋
I wrote this on Thursday. The style of this poem is a bit different. I got the title from the song "Helena" by My Chemical Romance. The reason why I chose the title is because in the song there's a part that goes like this;
"Can you hear me? Are you near me? Can we pretend to leave and then We'll meet again
When both our cars collide?" And there is no right way or wrong way. Poetic license!
"So Long, Goodnight"
Written by: Hannah R.D.
As her head hit
the car's dashboard...
Blood spilt from
her inside...
The yellow mum
in her hand...
Wilted as day
turned to night...
The bottom of
the hourglass...
Filled with tiny
grains of sand...
For time had
run out...
And she-
she was dead...
2007-10-20 10:10:38 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
These are just a few words from some of my published poems.
I keep having these thoughts of suicide,
because..............................
from my feelings I just can't hide.
OH how I long to place
a few scars upon your ugly face.
Why oh why can't they see
that this life is pure misery.
I am a published poet and I have written dark poetry a time in my past when I was very depressed, I also have written sarcastic, humorist, love, Christian poetry, what ever emotion I am feeling at the time.
Writing can be very therapeutic.
Good luck on your poetry writing!
2007-10-20 10:21:42 · answer #3 · answered by Pamela V 7 · 5⤊ 0⤋
Are you depressed? I like poetry but if you are stuck only on the dark side maybe you should seek out psychiatric help.Then keep writing to help you release.
2007-10-20 12:02:39 · answer #4 · answered by pamkayvan 4 · 2⤊ 0⤋
mine isnt realy that dark,its only about me being hated by everyone and how lonely i feel.
2007-10-20 10:18:58 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
My friend wrote this ..she is good at stuff like this
http://ficlets.com/stories/5036
2007-10-20 09:45:33 · answer #6 · answered by BAM! 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋