Here is the link to my piece of writing:
http://meanderingtrevor.blogspot.com/2007/10/looking-back-we-never-forgot-how-to.html
[For some inexplicable reason Yahoo moderators deleted the question when I posted it recently. This question does NOT violate the community guidelines]
2007-10-20 01:25:42 · 4 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ History
the piece has been accepted, as is, for publication in a UK magazine.
Just heard
2007-10-20 01:56:11 · update #1
very serious
2007-10-20 02:08:55 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
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2016-10-07 06:47:14 · answer #2 · answered by ? 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
The writing is okay and is in a form of informal chatting structure. As to content, I have no experience or education to make a comment one way or another. I guess since this is the history category it could be viewed as one of those personal stories of an individuals history.
2007-10-20 01:56:01 · answer #3 · answered by Randy 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Above average blogging, a couple of misused infinitives notwithstanding.
2007-10-20 01:37:37 · answer #4 · answered by Michael J 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋