I Love the poem. The rhythm of it seems to express meaning along with the words. Sad, but so beautiful because it's so real... it's how you feel. It comes through.
I think there are many people in the world who can relate to it, too. I went through similar stuff when I was a young girl. Then time went by and I finally realized the whole thing was silly and I turned the whole thing around. I can see now, that all I needed was to believe in myself and learn how to stand up for myself. Don't listen to those jerks.
One day you will look back on all of this and realize you never really had to put up with all of that crap from those losers. You are way cooler and more real than they are. See through their false pride and glee.. They are fools. Fooling themselves. They writhe and squirm deep inside every day. Underneath, they are insecure and projecting their own pain on to you.
See them as ridiculous, shallow and boring, because that's what they are... a waste of energy. You, on the other hand, are a brilliant poet! You have talent and giftedness to share with the world.
2007-10-19 21:30:26
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answered by Loveloop 2
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It's a really great poem but don't be so down on yourself! You are a beautiful person and you deserve to be respected. This is along the lines of Jim Wheeler's story (and his poetry) and it's very eerie that your initials on Yahoo are J W.
There really is a life past high school. Just hang in there. It does get better! High school kids are very cruel to each other but if you decide to go to college you'll see how everyone suddenly matures and treats each other like adults (with respect - the way people should be treated).
2007-10-19 23:23:01
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answered by Mr. Sexi Man 5
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I actually got goose bumps when reading this poem. It was awesome. This is very much how I felt a lot of the time when I was in high school.
Very, very good.
Keep up the good work and remember you are an awesome and special person worth the world.
Thank you for sharing this with us.
2007-10-19 21:02:38
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answered by Tommy Thompson 4
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2016-10-07 06:39:28
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answered by courcelle 4
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Great work man, it really gets it across, makes me think of me every morning when i go to school, and how bad it must be for you, i'd support you, even without the poem
2007-10-19 21:40:03
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answered by Jimmie Kezza 3
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I love poetry. Sounds really good. Alot better than I can do. Keep it up.
2007-10-19 20:54:48
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answered by Dae 3
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oh kool
LOL when i was in school alot of my poems had that same thing
"laughing at me and laughing at my pain"
yea i know...school is tough
hang in there BUDDY dont worry things will turn out alright
:)
2007-10-20 06:48:20
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answered by Anonymous
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You have the best poetry ever. keep going. great! write some more, and thank you.
2007-10-19 21:28:45
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answered by seeya1423 1
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Damn good for a starter.Keep on it.all the best.
2007-10-19 20:52:18
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answered by brkshandilya 7
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pretty good ^^
2007-10-20 02:39:45
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answered by Anonymous
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