ok this poem is written in an idea of a person who hates joy and people who spread them in this world are fakers.. pain and evil is the real deal because it is honest and straight to the point about pleasure with no consequences.. put this character in your head and see it in his point of view.
Two miles away,
the vile angels make me stay;
at their realm filled with con artist,
teach me the dread for death
In the world of dagger masks,
worn by the enemies dawn and dusk;
Blinded by a warmth that burns my dead wound,
yet silence crept in my soul till i saw the black moon;
It's shadow lights shone to soothe,
with no agony and pain I learned truth.
pleasure is a sin,
learn to hate;
dont force just grin,
and accept dark fate.
2007-10-19 19:16:15 · 6 answers · asked by cRedible!!! 5 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
I see the writer's point yet feel no real bond to that person. That's pretty dark, even for me. If it satisfies this person's need to draw other dark souls to comment, the writer may achieve that goal. I wouldn't expect this piece to be in the Smithsonian, however.
2007-10-19 20:12:55 · answer #1 · answered by Your Uncle Dodge! 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
this is amazing, you shold be proud of yourself... its very enjoyable to read and has a nice ending
2014-05-11 00:44:53 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
incredible incredible, you have some spelling errors: yet then I remeber life isn't a fairy tale. perhaps if I choose upon a famous man or woman, i will flow away and be, the on i actually desire to be. desire you're no longer certainly this form nevertheless.
2016-10-13 06:28:08 · answer #3 · answered by thorton 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
this is called dark poetry..aka the greatest form of poetry..
and you, my fellow hellion, have just written a very good one...
2007-10-20 02:55:00 · answer #4 · answered by Karnival Kid 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
it's a nice poem
2007-10-21 02:28:22 · answer #5 · answered by Analyst 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Sorry. Don't get the point. doesn't gel for me.
2007-10-19 20:19:22 · answer #6 · answered by LELAND 4 · 0⤊ 1⤋