Permanent Temporary
Our lives both run wrong directions
Yet the feelings pull strongly together
We can’t promise too much for certain
So we promise to be there whenever
I know that there will be tomorrow
I know that we never will marry
I know that I can’t be without you
I become your permanent temporary
You go home to be with your troubles
I go back to my nothing to wait
We realize our next burst of passion
Is held in the rough hands of fate
Never in all our childhood dreams
Does love ever challenge as this
The stem of the rose has so many thorns
Before reaching the flower of bliss
So we share in what hidden joy we find
In worlds alone too large to carry
Knowing in need you can call on me
I am your permanent temporary
Laughing Dolphin Music
2007-10-19 17:29:00
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answer #1
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answered by Your Uncle Dodge! 7
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My mistress's eyes are nothing like the sun;
Coral is far more red than her lip's red;
If snow be white, why then her breasts are dun,
If hair be wires, black wires grow on her head.
I have seen roses damasked, red and white,
But no such roses see I in her cheeks;
In some perfumes there is more delight
Than the breath with which my mistress reeks.
I love to hear her speak, yet well I know,
Music hath a far more pleasing sound;
I grant I never saw a goddess go;
My mistress, when she walks, treads on the ground.
And yet, by heaven, I think my love as rare
As any she belied with false compare.
-William Shakespeare
2007-10-19 17:19:39
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answered by God Told me so, To My Face 5
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I write poems but not love poems. However, you should like this one by Edgar Allen Poe. It's called Annabelle Lee.
It was many and many a year ago,
In a kingdom by the sea,
That a maiden there lived whom you may know
By the name of Annabel Lee;
And this maiden she lived with no other thought
Than to love and be loved by me.
I was a child and she was a child,
In this kingdom by the sea;
But we loved with a love that was more than love-
I and my Annabel Lee;
With a love that the winged seraphs of heaven
Coveted her and me.
And this was the reason that, long ago,
In this kingdom by the sea,
A wind blew out of a cloud, chilling
My beautiful Annabel Lee;
So that her highborn kinsman came
And bore her away from me,
To shut her up in a sepulcher
In this kingdom by the sea.
The angels, not half so happy in heaven,
Went envying her and me
Yes! that was the reason
(as all men know, In this kingdom by the sea)
That the wind came out of the cloud by night,
Chilling and killing my Annabel Lee.
But our love it was stronger by far than the love
Of those who were older than we
Of many far wiser than we
And neither the angels in heaven above,
Nor the demons down under the sea,
Can ever dissever my soul from the soul
Of the beautiful Annabel Lee.
For the moon never beams without bringing me dreams
Of the beautiful Annabel Lee;
And the stars never rise but I feel the bright eyes
Of the beautiful Annabel Lee;
And so, all the night-tide, I lie down by the side
Of my darling, my darling, my life and my bride,
In the sepulcher there by the sea,
In her tomb by the sounding sea.
2007-10-19 18:28:50
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answered by Bindi 4
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It became into extremely properly written. yet, i might ought to declare that some punctuation is mandatory. As a fellow author of poetry I to have a punctuation issue. I many times use to lots, yet i'm coaching myself the place it fairly is mandatory. to your poem i might insert some as follows: Are those plant existence on the path forward Sucking the water from mondays rain residing off of yesterdays sorrow? (<--- right here) They bloom crimson. (<---- right here) Is that the sunlight (a comma ought to bypass right here after sunlight or...) Hung with slightly of luck above (...after above,yet no longer the two) changing clouds with easy Drying puddles and tears? (<---right here) existence is renewed. (<---right here) And however the trees have burned away the eco-friendly buds have fought to stay to tell the tale changing previous existence with new. I comprehend a writers variety, and that i'm sorry in case you're taking this too harsh. yet, to even it out, your over all poem became into impressive. great be conscious determination, flow, expression, and sense. Mail me it sluggish and we are able to communicate extra approximately poetry. (=^_^=)
2016-12-15 04:26:37
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answered by isador 4
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here are some poems I wrote, check them out see if you like them
http://flowatree.magix.net/website/
2007-10-19 23:14:21
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answered by Teena R 2
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i wrote your name in the sky but the wind blew it away. i wrote your name in rhe sand but the waves washed it away.. i wrote your name in my heart and forever it will stay.
2007-10-19 17:24:18
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answered by Anonymous
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