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A Poet From The Moon
Written By Semper Fi Reborn

I was downtown Newark, N.J.,
Corner of Broad and Market in fact.
When the first ship arrived,
Causing my whole face to go slack.

The streets cleared fast,
There were folks hurdling other folks to run by.
One second I'm ordering a hotdog,
And a UFO appears in the sky.

Out of it's speakers,
Came voice that soothed like a croon.
That's the first time we on Earth,
Heard the poet from the moon.

2007-10-18 14:08:21 · 6 answers · asked by Semp-listic! 7 in Arts & Humanities Poetry

6 answers

Wow!!! Semper, this is so beautiful.

"Out of it's speakers,
Came voice that soothed like a croon.
That's the first time we on Earth,
Heard the poet from the moon."

I love this verse, thank you so much Semper!!! God bless this talent that you posses so beautifully. (applause)

2007-10-19 00:37:27 · answer #1 · answered by . 5 · 5 0

wow nice semper fi.

2007-10-18 14:22:02 · answer #2 · answered by fire and ice 4 · 2 0

You are gifted with expression, my friend! I like the imagery you project with this; Moon will be very touched, I'm certain! :)

2007-10-18 19:22:02 · answer #3 · answered by Jack B, goodbye, Yahoo! 6 · 4 0

When i read your poetry i always go wow ; and it brings a big smile on my face,,

2007-10-18 15:07:03 · answer #4 · answered by Cami lives 6 · 1 0

i dunno who you're talking about. your poem reminds me a little bit of david bowie's early stuff... it has kind of a 'ground control to major tom' feel to it.

2007-10-18 19:35:21 · answer #5 · answered by That Guy Drew 6 · 2 0

She will love it of course...!!!
YOU are truly talented...

2007-10-18 14:20:04 · answer #6 · answered by Kerilyn 7 · 4 0

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