heaven and hell
I walk on this planet,
And I am just a man.
Tripping, sometimes stumbling,
I try to do the best I can
No more important than anyone else,
Whatever I do I really have no plan.
I want to experience all life has to give,
I've never lived my life, wanting to live.
Bored and depressed til you came along,
I'm just tired of being a working class slave.
Heaven and Hell, I believe we create,
Wandering this palnet we decide our own fate.
I've gone from the deepest most painful of hell,
Come out the oter side fully intact.
To hell with you Satan I'm not coming back,
I love my new life, my wife I adore.
My pain from the past, now slowly it fades,
Pain for true love, a hell of a trade.
Most everyone I know wishes us the best,
Those who oppose, can go straight back to hell.
2007-10-18 08:59:25 · 9 answers · asked by The Dark Prince 3 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
You said it brother... who says things can't be shiny and clear even in the darkness!
Hi Mrs. Dark Prince
2007-10-18 21:59:03 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I'm sure your wife will love it because it came straight from the heart. Good-luck
2007-10-18 09:04:35 · answer #2 · answered by muffin134 1 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Now thats a great love poem to the mrs.; and i know she;ll love it ;and i do always wish you and your wife the best and all happiness always.,
2007-10-18 09:16:40 · answer #3 · answered by Cami lives 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Wonderful attempt to leave the past behind.
2007-10-19 05:09:48 · answer #4 · answered by Analyst 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
your wife is lucky to have such a poetically gifted husband!=)
2007-10-18 09:18:03 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I am glad you have found happiness.
2007-10-18 12:33:39 · answer #6 · answered by Marguerite 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Lighthearted??? More elaberation on specifically what it is about HER that "saved" you from your despair.
"I have no plan"? Get a plan.
2007-10-18 09:36:55 · answer #7 · answered by LELAND 4 · 1⤊ 2⤋
that's really sweet! i hope she likes it!
2007-10-18 09:04:40 · answer #8 · answered by Emily 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋
its sweet for her
2007-10-18 09:15:22 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋