nothing remains
I have the feeling like being torn apart,
When my pleasures and desires meet.
Please let me enjoy these moments,
Until the very last second ticks slowly away.
Nothing is left but your image in my head,
A fading picture in my blackend mind.
I lay down my head in deepest sorrow,
I feel absolute emptiness deep sown in my soul.
The waves of time wash away the blood,
So that nothing remains of all of this.
Sadness encompasses my entire pathetic life,
But only you really know me, know exactly where I hurt.
As my life slowly fades away to gray,
I can see the end of this perfect misery.
My tears fall down, completely fee,
In a never ending salty running stream.
My journey into freedom, has now just begin,
I can see all the things left to my way come.
But life is not always just how is seems,
Again I spend my night, drowning in my dreans.
2007-10-18 07:11:24 · 7 answers · asked by The Dark Prince 3 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
'Nothing is left but your image in my head,
A fading picture in my blackend mind.
I lay down my head in deepest sorrow,
I feel absolute emptiness deep sown in my soul.'
Thank you so much for expressing how I am feeling now!
But the whole poem is great. Good poem, once again.
Best,
Ana
2007-10-18 07:37:07 · answer #1 · answered by Analyst 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Uh oh not again, this time it's the dream thing, I always drown in my dreams both figuratively and literally... they say if you die in your dreams you die in reality, but guess what ? I'm still alive and I have died several times in my dreams. But I would rather that than have to face people and situations from my past night after night as they relive themselves just about every night for weeks. Then I usually have a brief respite from them and always when things are looking up, something triggers them again. I think it is lack of closure, lack of my being believed or validated in the past, and/or that I cannot process the information that I received in the past because even then, I knew it was wrong.
2007-10-18 09:15:17 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
This is one of the most heartfelt poems i have ever read in my life .I have felt a little bit like this and it was really painful.My heart goes out to you; and all your trails; of sadness..Thanks for always sharing your wonderful works of art ....Shelly
2007-10-18 09:00:29 · answer #3 · answered by Cami lives 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Wow this is fantastic, the flow in the poem is flawless, a little bit of orthographic mistakes but the entire poem is ravishing. Bravo!!!! This is art, a beautiful poem, my love.
Your angel
Marilyn
2007-10-18 07:43:35 · answer #4 · answered by . 5 · 1⤊ 1⤋
...life goes on for those who choose to... great poem.. if everyone could be as good as you are.. (not to say that i dont know any ppl like that- lol)
2007-10-18 08:15:24 · answer #5 · answered by dragonflyy 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Hmm..I like how you explain everything in this poem....
2007-10-18 07:24:54 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I THINK IT`S A GOOD POEM !!
2007-10-18 07:29:03 · answer #7 · answered by Skyla R 1 · 1⤊ 0⤋