can you think of a good story opaning ( with vampires in )?

Question

make shure it has vampires in and a queen vampire with short blonde hair thanks

Answer 1

OK, here it goes.

The giant thrown room was mostly dark except for the dim light of about twenty or so candles lined up on each wall. It smelt musty and an aroma of mildew floated around in the air. We were in a cave that seemed to be carved straight into a gigantic mountain. Sometimes, in the rare moments of silence, a small droplet of water could be heard while it splattered on one of the cold rocks that fitted together in a pathetic attempt to make a floor.
i was one the only person paying attention to my surroundings. Everyone else was staring at a petite, pale skinned, goddess with short blonde hair sitting atop a wide crimson red and onyx black throne. Her eyes, an eerie shade of black, stood out from her thin face and peered out on the crowd before her. Her thick blood red nails wrapped around the arms of her throne as she smiled wickedly.
a stubby man at her side turned to her and whispered in her ear. she nodded her head and silently stood up. all eyes were one her. her beauty, i must admit, was astonishing. i found it hard to believe that anything in the physical world could look like her.
"Welcome friends." she said with a slight hiss. "I am Gortania, Empress of the undead and Tempter of fate. My people call me a great deal of things, but as for you, call me Enchantress." The crowd marveled at her, eyes wide and hands trembling. It seemed as if they were hyptnotized, but for some reason, I wasn't. She seemed sinister to me and I couldn't understand why the events from the night before were no longer in my memory. Thoughts ran wild throughout my mind and i was only brought back from them when her velvet hiss continued.
"I am aware that none of you know why you are here and now you must listen closely, for i am about to tell you. As I said before, one of my many names is Empress of the undead. I understand this may mean little to you... so far. You see, I am centuries old and my people... the undead, or, as you may recognize it, vampires... have lived for a long long time without being detected. Up until recently, we were able to get by with our hunting in the human world and such, that's right, we do drink blood... human blood, but fear not! Before i contnue, i assure you that this is not your purpose. Now, to continue my statement, until recently, we have been able to hunt in the human world without being detected, but i have seen a great light that can bring my people to glory and i have chosen you to help us. We plan to enslave the human race, to make them our willing servents and do with them as we wish. Do you understand so far?" she paused. A giant, "Yes, Enchantress." escaped from the crowd and she nodded happily.
"Good." she hissed. "Now, I am short a few thousand soldiers in my army. You are the few, the elite, the chosen ones, to help me and my people reign supreme. You will go through what we call "the change"."

Answer 2

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Answer 3

The deep black of night crept toward dawn as the Vampyre clan slowly drew the shades blocking out the imminent fingers of the sun. The Vampire queen, resplendent in her century old vestments of black velvet and leather watched quietly as the nightly revelry became the day's time of sleep. Life in the Mannse, that great castle shaped home of the clan for 17 centuries held her close as a lovers embrace. And yet, she felt empty, wanting....
She wrapped her long thin arms around herself and threw her head back. For many years she had kept her bright blonde hair in a disguising boys cut, giving those women who saw her an impression of innocence and those men who saw her an impression of wanton lust.

Answer 4

The morning drew nigh and a short stretch of a orange beam could just be seen appearing from in between the large and grassy hills of Oakwood Falls.

Dark and unrecognisable figures swam violently through the trees, dodging fallen branches and small plants of the forest floor. More seemed to appear as the stretch of orange sunshine grew longer and brighter. Some of the tall figures cursed underneath their breathe as they hurried along the forest.

As the trees became sparser further into the heart of the dark woods a - shall we call it ? Or maybe abode? - what ever the strange and lopsided building was it was certainly not something you would expect to find in everyday life.

As the bodies moved closer to it, it was revealed to be some sort of manor, yes a manor, a manor with great big cracked and dusty windows, creaking doors and roof tiles scattered across the patch of brown and unhealthy grass (which had obviously not been watered for many months - maybe even years).

They all stopped as the reached the first step of the porch (There was not many of them, just a few) They looked at each other grimly and then one, one of the middle ones, stepped forward as graceless and lumbering as a elephant trying to catch a cheetah. The oafish figure hesitated then knocked on the great brass door with the heavy knocker.

They waited a few awkward and anxious moments.

They door creaked as it opened, barely an inch. A cruel and slightly twisted voice hissed. 'Yesss?'

'Hylarck.' The middle figure said, mustering up all the courage his weak, bit large, figure could.

The door swung open and the owner of the hissing voice appeared. She hissed with her uncommen voice. 'Yes, we were expecting you.' She seemed to give the middle figure a up-and-down look before stepping sideways to let teh group in.

'This way.' She said with an air of importance. 'She is patiently waiting for you.' She made her way to another door. She screwed up her nose, disapprovingly, as the six figures passed her.

They entered the room, and gaped as they looked up at a tall and superiour figure staring down at them. She had a long and stuck-up face which was suprisingly pale compared to her bright blond hair which swayed just above her shoulders.

'Well?' She snarled at them.

'We've done it, Countess. We 'ave taken 'em all out' One of six before her replied, trembling in his clothes. 'We 'ave ... Countess.'

'Are you sure?' She growled. 'Because if you haven't Raydock, then you'll be expecting the worst. No more mistakes!'

All six of tehm flinched as she spat the alst few words. 'No, ma'am, no ... we ain't ... we done it ... like you said: take all of 'em out, all of 'em and that's - that's what's we done.' He stuttered. 'We promise ... we swear to yeh.'

She considered him for a moment until she declared. 'Very well then.'

Answer 5

Boris knocked on the door. His mistress, Lady Blood the vampire queen welcomed him.
'Hello Boris. Tonight we'll have blood' she said, pointing to a bloody lamb carcus.

Answer 6

Once upon a time, long long ago, in a land far, far away, there lived this count who lived in a large castle up on the moutain, its been told, that this count would invite the young people of the village below, to his castle during the full moon and they would never return........!

Answer 7

she gazed in the mirror, and gave herself a wicked smile showing her white fangs. She smoothed her short blond hair,
and turned to the door and swept out into the night. It was time to hunt.

Answer 8

Sorry, vampires are way too cliched. Especially vampire queens. I wouldn't read such a story, much less write one.

Answer 9

How about:

"She is probably the Best of Vamps, she is probably the Worst of Vamps... let's meet her on this most evil of nights and you can decide."

Answer 10

you want to write a book? You can't even spell sure or opening. =/