verse 1
you are always a breath away
tell me what you want to say
tell me with all your heart
because im soo sure
were drifting apart
i love you
stay close to me
as close as you can ever be
chorus
your a million miles away
i miss your smile
theres a million walls in the way
i miss your eyes
my love theres nothing i wudnt do
to be rigjht there next to you
verse 2
STUCK !!!!!!!!!!!!!!
2007-10-18 00:25:47 · 9 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Music ➔ Lyrics
i think that's amazing.
i would definitely listen to this song.
keep it up!! :)
it made me smile!
2007-10-18 00:29:10 · answer #1 · answered by project mayhem 3 · 1⤊ 2⤋
You kind of took the meter away, and stripped the feeling out of the chorus.
Are you sure you're not forcing it?
2007-10-18 07:38:42 · answer #2 · answered by Your Uncle Dodge! 7 · 0⤊ 1⤋
what you have so far is really good... try this...
yet no matter how far away
i'll always come when i here you say
you need me, like i need you
our love will never break or fail
cause i for one let it stale
and when we are apart
you'll forever be within my heart
because i love you
chours...
well what do you think about that...
2007-10-18 07:56:05 · answer #3 · answered by Geist 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋
I like them so far, but what kind of music / style are you going to have them too? (country, rap, soft rock, etc)
2007-10-18 07:29:17 · answer #4 · answered by ellusionary 5 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Soundz like yer in luv.....why don't cha just talk to er arready?
2007-10-18 07:29:11 · answer #5 · answered by Calm 4 · 0⤊ 2⤋
stolen from when I leave you by MAGNA FI
2007-10-22 07:26:50 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaayyyy to generic.
be more original.
too poppy and common!
2007-10-18 07:31:14 · answer #7 · answered by FIGHTOFFYOURDEMONS 4 · 1⤊ 1⤋
i hate to sound like that guy from American idol, basically because i hate that show, but that was terrible
2007-10-18 07:27:55 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 2⤋
very good...in fact i might use them if thats ok
2007-10-18 07:39:48 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋