please help! I'm having writers block! D:
2007-10-17 14:09:18 · 11 answers · asked by x 1 in Education & Reference ➔ Words & Wordplay
"A chilly blast, accompanied by the gentle hum of the AC, swept through me like a ghost and sent shock throughout my system."
Hope that's helpful! Writer's block can be a pain.
2007-10-17 14:17:58 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Stop and think about the things that make you feel cold, other than the air conditioning. What about a snowy, wintry day, slipping and falling on the ice, the shivers you get from a cold wind, drinking an ice-cold drink on a hot day, someone putting an ice cube down your neck, having the chills when you're sick, goose pimples when you're watching a scary movie, a cold blast of air when opening the door in the winter time. These are just a few suggestions. You can probably think of better ones, but these might get you started. Good luck! Br-r-r-r-!
2007-10-17 21:14:40 · answer #2 · answered by gldjns 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Although the AC was turned on high ,it was still freezing cold. I was shivering,and my poor feet was all numb.I couldn't feel my heart bit and I thought for a second that it was going to stop due to the excessive cold.
2007-10-17 21:16:31 · answer #3 · answered by dicovi 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
'The air was crisp and fresh, like on a cold winter's morning when you first get out of bed and dive back for the blankets'
'The atmosphere had a chill to it, goosebumps began forming on their arms'
They might not be any good, but I've used the them both in books, feel free to borrow them.
2007-10-17 21:15:30 · answer #4 · answered by kt_brown2003 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
The chilly wind blows on my face sending shivers down my spine.
OR
My teeth chattered as my toes curled as the cold engulfs me.
2007-10-17 21:14:19 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Here is corny:
As the chill of this night opened my small, bath window, I tossed the last of the withered cubes into my cup. My re-lighting of a smothered cigarette lit the end my memories of her icy message, "You stink!".
Why didn't I forgo the inevitable and plunge myself into the nuance of loving?
2007-10-17 21:28:52 · answer #6 · answered by Lizbiz 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
The air felt like ice against my skin, making the hair on my neck stand on end.
2007-10-17 21:12:54 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
My cheeks are getting red, as i try to warm myself by rubbing my hands together i can see the goose bumps on my arms, my nose is as red as rudolphs,my ears feel like ice has built up on them like ice has frozen on grass,
I hope that helps
2007-10-17 21:17:47 · answer #8 · answered by lexi 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Cold as the dark side of the moon.
2007-10-17 21:14:15 · answer #9 · answered by beatlemaniac 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
my body entering the frostbitten air was like a ham with freezerburn LMAO
idk, im horrible at writing
2007-10-17 21:14:18 · answer #10 · answered by Jaji 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋