2007-10-17 13:22:17 · 14 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
Oh...this one is fabulous!! Very minimalist.....I like that in poetry! I really wouldn't add one more word to it. I think you're a genius.
2007-10-17 14:10:46 · answer #1 · answered by beano™ 6 · 6⤊ 0⤋
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2016-10-04 01:24:58 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I suppose the art of Bonsai Sculpting would be considered to be a minimalistic representation of general horticultural design,however Bonsai rhymes with so few words of any significance....Your poem must stand,as is...
2007-10-17 14:28:58 · answer #3 · answered by bonsai bobby 7 · 3⤊ 0⤋
A title is not a poem.
A poem is a poem.
You did not write a poem; you wrote a title.
2007-10-17 15:58:36 · answer #4 · answered by Nathan D 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I prefer,
Is minimalism okay with you?
I have few words.
2007-10-17 22:02:04 · answer #5 · answered by Marguerite 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Ahhhh it doesn't matter, you're just a nobody, wannbe poet hack anyways. LOL
BB,
Raji the Green Witch
2007-10-17 13:49:24 · answer #6 · answered by Raji the Green Witch 7 · 2⤊ 0⤋
LOL! Excellent.
That dude with the crush on you wrote one too:
http://answers.yahoo.com/question/index?qid=20071017122001AAZUdMt&r=w
Why don't you go on over there and tell him you're grateful but you just don't swing with policemen?
2007-10-17 14:07:16 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 3⤊ 0⤋
That's your best one yet, don't change a thing, send it to poetry.com, I'll bet you get an award and a plaque for it.
2007-10-17 13:31:58 · answer #8 · answered by Dondi 7 · 3⤊ 0⤋
Drop the word "Ideas," and you have a winner.
2007-10-17 14:37:08 · answer #9 · answered by One Wing Eagle Woman 6 · 4⤊ 0⤋
I think your poem is fine the way it is.
2007-10-17 13:50:15 · answer #10 · answered by Mama Otter 7 · 4⤊ 0⤋