regrets
The pain inside only grows with time,
Grief envelops my very soul.
Ever silent in a lifetime of regret,
Words mean nothing in the end.
Sacrificed to the bitter chill of the night,
I will ride the wind like Icarus forever.
Like the last remnants of a dying sun,
From which a silent cry echos still
My blood is boiling inside my veins,
Pain waltzes together with my agony.
Lies, they are laughing at my burning tears,
I long for just this once, to love all my fears.
I still wait for the sun to somehow rise,
For the light to emerge from the eastern sky.
Come deadly wind, come embrace the night,
Daylight it waits to end my suffering forever.
2007-10-17 09:27:08 · 8 answers · asked by The Dark Prince 3 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
I love it! Especially this part, "Lies, they are laughing at my burning tears, I long for just this once, to love all my fears"
I love this, I hope you find a better mood. Once again your writing takes my breathe away.
Love,
Shadow
2007-10-17 15:40:02 · answer #1 · answered by shadowofu_love29 3 · 2⤊ 0⤋
This is absolutely exquisite writing. "The pain waltzes with my agony" wow!!! that was powerful. Two feelings dancing slow. A whirlwind of art in it. Bravo!! my love
Your baby angel
Marilyn
2007-10-17 17:00:35 · answer #2 · answered by . 5 · 3⤊ 0⤋
I'll call this one No Regrets, thanks for the inspiration.
A lady waits for you at home,
Of love her heart is full.
So full that it will overflow,
If her heartstrings you pull.
Her love for you makes her then smile,
And yours too I'll take bets.
I see no reason why you should,
Have all of these regrets.
Lay all that says to you, you're bad,
Before her lovely feet.
And show her then just who you are,
You'll find she'll still be sweet.
Regret not who you may now be,
But who you might have been.
The love of such a girl as her,
Can absolve any sin.
Go now to her, betroth your love,
Hold to her velvet hand.
You'll find you have it all right there,
The best in all the land.
enjoy, my friends
2007-10-17 17:20:13 · answer #3 · answered by Dondi 7 · 4⤊ 1⤋
I think it is good to express what ever one is feeling, we all
have low ebbs at times, and the last four lines speak of hope!
all is not lost, yet I think the last line needs reworded just
doesn't do the rest justice.
2007-10-17 16:49:47 · answer #4 · answered by jenny 7 · 2⤊ 1⤋
Your poem is so sad and it makes my heart feel your agony of your very soul,I wish you all the happiness you so do deserve as your a very great person with pain and agony running all thru your veins,... Shelly
2007-10-17 17:20:11 · answer #5 · answered by Cami lives 6 · 3⤊ 1⤋
OK sweetie what ever is making you feel so blue get rid of it. Go out and find something you love to do and do it for a very long time. Find inside your self to remove this terrible feeling before it governs your life (which I think is already is)
2007-10-17 16:31:58 · answer #6 · answered by zerlina208 3 · 3⤊ 3⤋
'I long for just this once, to love all my fears.'
Yes, there is this need of accepting ourselves.
Good work.
2007-10-18 02:45:26 · answer #7 · answered by Analyst 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
dang thats good...
2007-10-17 17:03:21 · answer #8 · answered by dragonflyy 4 · 3⤊ 1⤋