FALL LEAVES"
Roots grow deep, like friends that know,
leaves that fall with a certain bright glow.
Colored blazon in struggle,,, yet blasts of color,
make your angelic smile light,, like no other.
It is fall and time to see, a reflection deeply sad,
yet,, winter beckons, and our souls are surely glad.
Why do elements not so true, keep us valiantly far apart?
the love we shared special,, shall never as valleys depart.
We are not together in person, yet hunker down,
'sometimes blissful, yet missing,,, you I frown.
Your my shine,, an important hand,
A friend indeed, I will never demand.
Anymore than two souls share,
without you now, fell leaves stare.
2007-10-17 01:47:53 · 6 answers · asked by tommy C 1 in Family & Relationships ➔ Marriage & Divorce
grea piece of work! :)
2007-10-17 01:56:45 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Aww pooor baby sounds kinda of sad. I'll have to comfort you till she comes from the winter leaves or whatever.LOL And oh nice poem too.LOL
2007-10-17 14:05:01 · answer #2 · answered by I am mizz chilly 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I personally do not care for poems that rhyme. It always sounds contrived and not from the heart.
2007-10-17 08:52:22 · answer #3 · answered by tjnstlouismo 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I`m not a lady, but I`ll tap my feminine side for you on this one.
The leaves have eyes?????
2007-10-17 08:55:40 · answer #4 · answered by I tell it like it is 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Well done my friend... You have a very nice poem keep it up!!!!
2007-10-17 09:12:25 · answer #5 · answered by Beverly Anne N 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
wow..lOl..
I like ur poem.. keep up the good job...
2007-10-17 09:28:01 · answer #6 · answered by back2future 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋