it this a thesis?

Question

Macon Dread II Sruhad are two people who are similarities to each other like there altitudes toward business and self-confidence.

Answer 1

thesis - hmmm
only looks like one person

altitudes - should be attitudes
altitude is height - e.g. an airplane flies at an altitude of 30,000 feet

Answer 2

to some extent yes, but to make your thesis more believable avoid the word "like". Like makes it seem you are unsure. As in a thesis you want to prove something that you know is true, like, just doesn't do it.