This is a limerick I wrote after watching a video on YouTube about a guy who's irritated that his friends are always hooking up with his sister. It's a fictional limerick. Also, please don't let your political views get in the way of what you think about my poem!
I'm rather amused to say,
When my friends see my sister, they say, “Hey!”
Her breasts are enormous
And her face is quite gorgeous,
But too bad for them; she's gay!
2007-10-16 13:49:31 · 7 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
I read your comments and changed the second line so the poem now reads:
I'm rather amused to say,
My friends stare at my sister all day.
Her breasts are enormous
And her face is quite gorgeous,
But too bad for them; she's gay!
2007-10-16 14:01:06 · update #1
I think it's funny and i love the timing and rhythm not to mention the subject.
right on!!!!
2007-10-16 14:07:38 · answer #1 · answered by autumlovr 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Very funny, you should submit that to a humor website.
You have a gift.
Keep the limericks coming.
2007-10-16 20:57:44 · answer #2 · answered by ? 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Ha ha! I think it's pretty funny, but I'd reword the second line--"Hey" seems like an easy way out.
2007-10-16 20:58:35 · answer #3 · answered by Otter X 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Wunderbar!
2007-10-17 00:40:41 · answer #4 · answered by Nathan D 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Very funny. I like the 2nd one better than the first.
2007-10-16 23:43:34 · answer #5 · answered by DeborahDel 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Kinda cute! I think you should work on it a little more- maybe just a little "polishing".
Next thing you know, peeps will be passing it all around :)
2007-10-16 20:59:02 · answer #6 · answered by Reg M 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
lol
2007-10-16 20:57:48 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋