silence
How tragic it may seem,
To cleanse the soul of pain.
There might be no more tomorrows,
When my yesterdays were complete despair.
A silent cry I scream,
That no one hears but me.
Crushed beneath the shadows
Of a burden vast.
Too late to hold on anymore,
Behind my steel grey eyes.
The fire inside me has gone cold,
Endless torment held by silent walls.
Look deep into me,
Tell me what you see.
How deep the river of fate,
In the silence of the hours late.
2007-10-16 09:58:29 · 7 answers · asked by The Dark Prince 3 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
A good poem, a wonderful poem I must say. All that goes silent, peace, alone. I think is perfect how you describe the silence. Well done my love. Bravo!!!!
Your baby girl
Marilyn
2007-10-16 10:21:31 · answer #1 · answered by . 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like the description of this silent despair, when no one hears or understands.
2007-10-17 04:17:13 · answer #2 · answered by Analyst 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
wow i feel your pain in this poem as it really brings you close to it as the words hypnotize thru their meanings ...Nice work.,.,. .
2007-10-16 21:54:25 · answer #3 · answered by Cami lives 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
This is style of poetry is wonderfully familiar.
Hm..
2007-10-16 18:45:42 · answer #4 · answered by behind_infinity0123 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i like it, it's real deep.
kudos to you. good job.
2007-10-17 10:00:19 · answer #5 · answered by HEARTBOUND♥ 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
perfect...."A silent cry I scream"
... i know what you mean..
2007-10-16 20:29:08 · answer #6 · answered by dragonflyy 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i like it =)
2007-10-16 17:02:19 · answer #7 · answered by keightebby 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋