Did we all know it's Breast Cancer Awareness month?

Question

I also wrote something for the occassion, enjoy (or not)
Critique is not really required, but if you must, then endulge yourselves.

I just call this one
Happy Ending
When told I had but months to live,
I thought it all was through.
The doctor said I had a chance,
I then consulted you.

A flood of pityful tears I cried,
Then asked the question deep.
Would you be here to love me then,
Or from me would you creep?

Then from your lips I heard the words,
I wanted so to hear.
You said you'd love me for all time,
My heart lept up to cheer.

I told the doctor go ahead,
He cut me side to side.
There's nothing on my chest but scars,
The outcome I can't hide.

But now I have my life to live,
My man is still with me.
I hope to live forever with,
My man beside of me.

Answer 1

I think it's very well done, and a comment to nj whatever, petition congress for any type awareness month you want, but this isn't the place to kibitz about it.

Answer 2

Yes, and I even bought a pink bracelet with a silver heart and ribbon in it to help!

Answer 3

Sorry, I didn't read your poem in detail.
It's a few "awareness" months, I think. Instead of breast cancer, it should be more inclusive for all gynecological cancers. We need a Women's Health Awareness Month.