Can ya tell I'm not very good at this sort of thing? Anyway, here it is:
"The seniors never lost their Hornet spirit. They are truly what younger students should strive to be."
It's for yearbook. Does that sound right? I don't think so.
2007-10-15 14:52:04 · 6 answers · asked by Me 7 in Education & Reference ➔ Words & Wordplay
Whoo for the yearbook. Gotta love it. The senior class, full of Hornet spirit, were an inspiration to the underclassmen. It cuts down on your words; condensing is always a good thing. good luck!
2007-10-15 14:59:53 · answer #1 · answered by kgoldfish8 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Younger students should strive to have the same never flagging Hornet spirit as the seniors.
The seniors have left a legacy for younger students to strive after - a Hornet spirit that never gives up.
Either of those work?
2007-10-15 22:02:17 · answer #2 · answered by muttlover 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It sounds as if you want the younger students to be Hornet spirit.
Try: The younger students should strive for the Hornet spirit that the seniors have always had.
2007-10-15 22:02:34 · answer #3 · answered by Da Bomb 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
The seniors never lost their Hornet spirit. This is truly the attitude that junior students should strive for.
lol i dunno....hope this helps.
2007-10-15 22:01:32 · answer #4 · answered by jeristhin 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Our Seniors never lost their Hornet spirit.
Next year's graduates can learn a lesson from them.
2007-10-15 22:01:43 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
Your sentence seems to work well for the intended reader. Substitute the word "younger" to read "junior."
2007-10-15 22:01:23 · answer #6 · answered by Guitarpicker 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋