Your friendly halls have turned into a chaotic, nightmarish environment.
Im writing a paper with this sentence.. does the word nightmarish sound awkward? Should i cut it out completely or change it around? A friend suggested "into a chaotic nightmare." What do you guys think?
2007-10-15 14:18:55 · 4 answers · asked by joe 1 in Education & Reference ➔ Words & Wordplay
Well....is that how you feel about it? I mean, does that how the character feels about the halls? You need to write what you think/feel, not what your friend suggests! Come on, I dare you! Tell me how you really feel!!!!!!!!!
2007-10-15 14:29:27 · answer #1 · answered by somethingoranother 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
How about 'your friendly halls have turned into a chaotic, hostile neighborhood'?
2007-10-16 03:39:46 · answer #2 · answered by greenhorn 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like yours, but your friend's suggestion is even better. Somehow "nightmarish" combined with "environment" doesn't have the same punch.
2007-10-15 22:02:04 · answer #3 · answered by Isabel 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I don't like your digs.
2007-10-19 20:31:49 · answer #4 · answered by gray1800 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋