hi!.
im writing a haiku for school.. im in 9th grade..it has to be a "mystery haiku" so you dont say what it is. mines about stars..
so far i have the first line..
shining through the night.
i was going to put "sleeping during the day"
but it isnt enough syllables..
help?
2007-10-15 13:14:46 · 4 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
Shining through the night,
unseen in the blue daylight,
glittering pinpricks.
2007-10-15 13:42:39 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
Haiku in eastern has 3 lines written one suitable after yet another, with 17 syllables -- the 1st line contains 5 syllables, the 2nd has seven, and the final has 5 (5, 7, 5). In English (a under pressure language), the suggestions could be expressed with a short line, a protracted line, and yet another short -- line. regardless of the incontrovertible fact that, some contemporary English haiku writers have written 2-line haiku. this is an occasion: The flowers Reached the sky As on the grass I lie.
2016-11-08 10:39:19 · answer #2 · answered by feiss 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
shining through the night
pave the famous walk by the
Chinese movie house
2007-10-15 14:13:18 · answer #3 · answered by Greg H 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Look! It's Wayne's basement!
Except it's not Wayne's basement!
Isn't that just weird?
and for you sleeping line, use through instead of during.
2007-10-16 11:41:40 · answer #4 · answered by Steve 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋