it's a narrative one. I'm writing about how I ran the mile for the first time... x____x
And also, it would be GREAT if anyone could help me get a sentence to "grab" the readers attention too.
A tiny bit more of what it's about: My throat was dry, it was really hot outside, and my friend wouldn't stop running and I needed to keep up to talk to her.
It wasnt like a really bad experience, but I didn't have a hell lot of fun either.
2007-10-15
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