sunset's jealousy
Hey my dear friend Celtic moon,
I want to see you once again.
There's no way it's not too soon,
My love for you is not a sin.
I want to hear your perfect voice,
Silent night, your cold gray light.
I have forever made my choice,
To live my life with you at night.
I'm standing with you face to face,
Seabreeze blowing through your hair.
Your breasts covered with white lace,
I watch the sunset's silent glare.
2007-10-15 11:12:44 · 5 answers · asked by The Dark Prince 3 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
It's very nice. It sounds like a love between two lovers belonging to two different realms, it sounds like a fantasy tale.
2007-10-15 20:20:17 · answer #1 · answered by Analyst 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Very nice poem for somone so dear to you.I really liked the silent night cold gray night,
2007-10-15 19:03:42 · answer #2 · answered by Cami lives 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Absolutely stunning, I love the Celtic use in it and how the disappearance of the sun is describe. Love it, love it!!!!
Love you
Your angel wife
2007-10-15 18:30:18 · answer #3 · answered by . 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Very good, I like this one too.
2007-10-15 18:44:18 · answer #4 · answered by Dondi 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
thats really pretty.
2007-10-15 19:15:36 · answer #5 · answered by dragonflyy 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋