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it's a narrative one. I'm writing about how I ran the mile for the first time... x____x
And also, it would be GREAT if anyone could help me get a sentence to "grab" the readers attention too.

2007-10-15 10:45:03 · 2 answers · asked by Anonymous in Education & Reference Homework Help

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I like skcave's answer! That certainly would be an attention grabber!

2007-10-15 10:57:57 · answer #1 · answered by SC mom 4 · 0 0

How about " My First Milestone"?

I slumped to my knees, exhausted, feeling like I had been beaten within an inch of my life. What had I done? I'd run my first mile!
Hope this helps.

2007-10-15 17:50:30 · answer #2 · answered by SKCave 7 · 0 0

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