Rewrite the sentences to make them more lively and effective. You can shift phrases and clauses, elimate needless repetition and cliches, and make any other changes to make these sentences better
1) I had never seen such reprehensible behaviour before
2) Anna felt grateful and thankful to have a chance of taking advantage of the oppurtunity of getting a good education
2007-10-14 13:08:57 · 2 answers · asked by MJ 3 in Education & Reference ➔ Words & Wordplay
1.never have i encountered such unacceptable actions in the past.
2.anna felt very appreciative to have gained a chance of recieving such good schooling.
..............this is the last time i do ur hw for u, i was about to kill myself...."check ur spelling ,,behaviour,,,oppurtunity",,,?"
2007-10-14 13:26:24 · answer #1 · answered by help 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think the first sentence is fine but would simplify the 2d to read...
Anna appreciated the opportunity for a good education.
2007-10-14 21:51:27 · answer #2 · answered by ghouly05 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋