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Question

Ok, I am writing a transfer essay.
The question is: Please provide a statement (250 words) that addresses your reasons for transferring and the objectives you hope to acheive.

Since I am applying to more than one school, the essay can't be specific towards a particular school. I'm confused about how I am supposed to answer this question!? PLEASE HELP ME if you have any thoughts, you are helping me tremendously! THANK YOU!!!!

Answer 1

I want to share two of my favorite scriptures with you. What shall we then say to these things? If God be for us, WHO can be against us? - Romans 8:31. The Lord daily loadeth us with BENEFITS, even the God of our salvation. Selah. - Psalm 68:19

I wish you well. Peace, Love and God Bless.

YOU should write a letter with your best thoughts in it. Then you should "pinpoint" the person concerned with your best interest at heart, usually the President or Chairman of that college or university, for their help. You should start off with a "rough draft" of everything that you want to say. Only leave "blank spaces" where the name of the school should be.

The letter should go like this -

2500 South Lake Street
Pine Cone, Wisconsin
October 13, 2007



Honorable Conrad A. Noble, President
Clarksdale School of Higher Learning
2539 Oakcliffe Court
Greater Albany, New York

Dear Mr. Noble,

I am writing this letter to you because of the "high esteem" that my family and friends have for your school. My requirements are such that I would like to transfer there and be a part of such a "noteworthy school." I understand that you have a "strict" regimen of daily study periods which are used for investigation and research.

I am interested in the field of Biology and understand that you have the "particular animals and laboratory materials" needed for improvement of my investigational skills. I had initially wanted to have a major in Literature, but I have changed my mind. I definitely want to work with a more intense "positive" assistance to the environment and the animals about me. I want to improve "life" by making my very best contribution to it. I have thoroughly looked through your school's manual and found what I will need for the next 4 years. Thus, I wish to inquire what, if anything else, I will need to enroll in your school.

Many of my friends have looked forward to a school where they can have "parties" and engage in nonsense. They attend the school in which I am now enrolled. I find them to have a "general attitude" of nonchalance toward college life. I am a much more serious person than that. I want to be exemplary in every matter that involves my college career. I believe by transferring into your school, that this will be a two-fold situation, wherein we can both benefit.

Yes, I do like to socialize, but I believe that business always comes before pleasure.

Please let me know what requirements I need in order to be accepted in your school.

I thank you for your consideration and help with this matter.

Respectfully,


William Fredericks

Answer 2

If you are transferring, than you have a reason why. Insightly think about your feelings, and interpret them into an essay of what you have achieved up until this this point in your life, what you hope to achieve at the present, and where you hope to go in the future. If you can express self-growth and ambition in an essay, genuinely, than you have made a great argument. Definitely adapting each essay to include achievements that the school has made, especially in your specific area of interest, is great for adding a personal connection between you and the school. This would then give incentive to any academic advisor to consider you even further, and why you would be right for their program. It could be a pain to have to personalize each essay pertaining to the school, but if you know why you want to go to that school, than it should not be any trouble including this information in the last paragraph and using concluding language.

Answer 3

Just include these words more than once:
*Dedication
*Pride
And say:
I chose this school to apply to because I feel it is a very productive school full of knowledge and learning.
(Or something like that).