RAMJET
Written by Semper Fi Reborn
There I was a young Marine,
Behind the enemies lines.
Gunfire flying over my head,
While I'm laying with land mines.
The Sarge is barking, "TAKE THAT HILL",
Marines charge to comply.
Yet every man that charged the hill,
Was swatted like a fly.
This went on two bloody days,
And for three scream filled nights.
Until the Gunny took command,
To turn the tide of the fight.
He brought in a secret weapon,
The rumors said a sure bet.
We Marines did finally take that hill,
By using a RAMJET!
2007-10-13 13:10:10 · 8 answers · asked by Semp-listic! 7 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
I am honoured that you have chosen me to assist our worthy Marines to take "hill 19" .... or is that "hill R&S"? LOL
thank you Semper... WOW
teehee
2007-10-13 15:38:23 · answer #1 · answered by Ramjet 5 · 6⤊ 0⤋
Quite literally,poetic justice,as RAMJET executes the deletions, in this scenario. Nice touch once again,brother!!
2007-10-13 20:21:29 · answer #2 · answered by bonsai bobby 7 · 5⤊ 0⤋
Semper
your poems are wonderful
and I am sure Rammie will agree xx
2007-10-13 20:31:11 · answer #3 · answered by ☮ Pangel ☮ 7 · 4⤊ 0⤋
What a talented man you are! Very impressive. Rammie will surely love it. :)
2007-10-13 20:26:19 · answer #4 · answered by mrs O 6 · 2⤊ 0⤋
I'm sure Rammie will LOL. ;)
Just don't ever find the occasion to use lips, hips, tips, nips, pips, dips, crips, or any "ips" anywhere. I'm just pond slime.
2007-10-13 20:38:31 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 5⤊ 0⤋
Ramjet will love it; she knows quality when she sees it, and this a poem of very high quality. :)
2007-10-13 20:28:08 · answer #6 · answered by Jack B, goodbye, Yahoo! 6 · 5⤊ 0⤋
WHAT? do you write poems to everyone? Cool!
The poem is pretty good, I like it ^_^
2007-10-13 20:22:48 · answer #7 · answered by Love Yahoo!!! wannabe a princess 3 · 4⤊ 0⤋
She'll love it!! :)
You're great!! :)
2007-10-13 20:28:56 · answer #8 · answered by Moon :) 7 · 4⤊ 0⤋