can a thesis statement be more than one sentence?
cause i cant make mine make sence in just one!
2007-10-13 12:09:12 · 4 answers · asked by bannanalover47 1 in Education & Reference ➔ Homework Help
A thesis statement can be more than one sentence. It's almost impossible to put everything you want to say into one sentence. And a thesis STATEMENT tells the reader what you want to state. Good Luck!
2007-10-13 12:14:24 · answer #1 · answered by redskater53 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
You have to be more specific, put your main paragraph topics in your thesis statement. For example Mass production, increase of population, progression of technology, child labor, increase of tuberculoses, and pollution are the positive and negative effects of the Industrial Revolution. No, you don’t pick a side. Try not to be bias just write about the negative and positive effects. In your paragraphs, you topic sentence should be something like this, of course it depends what you picked as your effects. Mass production is a positive effect of the Industrial Revolution because (say why it was a positive effect). After your topic sentence, prove your topic sentence with evidence from sources such as your book or an article on the internet. What ever you use, cite your sources.
2016-05-22 06:51:30 · answer #2 · answered by amada 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Of course it can. You need to keep it to a short paragraph and to the point.
2007-10-13 12:17:17 · answer #3 · answered by Diane M 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
show me the statement please?
2007-10-13 12:14:47 · answer #4 · answered by LJG 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋