Keriyln
Written By Semper Fi Reborn
I have a secret garden,
Locked inside my mind.
Long ago I memorized the way,
Lest anyone should find.
The path to true enlightenment,
The doorway to the Sun.
And how could I trust such great beauty,
To just anyone?
For in my secret garden,
There does grow a tree.
That blossoms with a rare flower,
Which serenades me.
It fills my heart with joy,
That explodes from deep within.
This is why I call this tree,
My Precious Keriyln.
2007-10-13 05:20:52 · 7 answers · asked by Semp-listic! 7 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
THANK YOU SOOOO MUCH...YOU ARE SO KIND. (and i do have a secret garden)
How did you know...!!?!?!
This is really beautiful...THANK YOU...
Its a wonderful surprise!!!
2007-10-13 08:37:14 · answer #1 · answered by Kerilyn 7 · 6⤊ 0⤋
your mind is definitely a garden of great beauty.
and I could think of no better place for an image of Keriyln.
for she is as beautiful on the inside as she is on the out.
2007-10-13 15:47:53 · answer #2 · answered by Hannah's Grandpa 7 · 5⤊ 0⤋
Your poem moved me from inside.....but words are just not enough for this Lady. Excellent poem with lots of creativity and imagination. You are a true poet.
Kerilyn is precious for all of us. Love Her.
2007-10-13 15:17:58 · answer #3 · answered by ? 6 · 5⤊ 0⤋
I'm sure she'll be quite touched. It is a moving and beautiful poem about a beautiful and kindhearted lady.
2007-10-13 12:25:35 · answer #4 · answered by Jack B, goodbye, Yahoo! 6 · 7⤊ 0⤋
She will absolutely love it!! It's beautiful.
2007-10-13 13:18:53 · answer #5 · answered by mrs O 6 · 6⤊ 0⤋
that is just beautiful. I'm sure Kerilyn will love it!
:)
blessings (((semper))))
2007-10-13 13:02:23 · answer #6 · answered by Ramjet 5 · 7⤊ 0⤋
Wow, it's great!! :)
She'll love that!! :)
2007-10-13 13:08:07 · answer #7 · answered by Moon :) 7 · 6⤊ 0⤋