When al of sudden it was their turn to follow the tradition of the men in their family, Mark and Randy didn't kknow what was ahead of them when they began their trip onto the wilderness.
This book is from 'Between a Rock and a Hard Place'. I have to write a summary about it. Please help me with this sentence! Thanks!
-Mickey
2007-10-13 02:15:25 · 9 answers · asked by Anonymous in Education & Reference ➔ Words & Wordplay
In two sentences:
Mark and Randy began their trip onto the wilderness, not knowing what was ahead of them. At that moment, it became their turn to follow the tradition of the men in their family.
A shorter one, as requested:
As that moment came to follow the paternal traditions, Mark and Randy stepped unknowingly into the wild.
2007-10-13 02:28:51 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Following the tradition of the men in their family, Mark and Randy began their trip into the unknown wilderness. Hope this helps.
2007-10-13 09:59:42 · answer #2 · answered by SKCave 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Following the tradition of the men in their family, Mark and Randy began their uncertain trip into the wilderness.
Or maybe...
Following the tradition of the men in their family and unaware of what lie ahead, Mark and Randy began their trip into the wilderness.
2007-10-13 09:28:18 · answer #3 · answered by CMG 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Mark and Randy had never imagined what lay before them when they took on the task of making a trip to the wilderness to continue the family tradition.
2007-10-13 09:20:29 · answer #4 · answered by Shram 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Mark and Randy did not know what lie before them when they started their families traditional trip to the wilderness.
2007-10-13 09:24:14 · answer #5 · answered by lievedebs 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Suddenly it came Mark and Randy's turn to follow the family tradition- of all men to trek through the wilderness- and their fate was unknown
2007-10-17 08:01:12 · answer #6 · answered by kelby_lake 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Family tradition? Mark and Randy headed into the wilderness, knew they would be tested, but how?
2007-10-13 09:40:29 · answer #7 · answered by Kermitbust 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
The idea of a length of a sentence is not in how many words are in it but wether it expresses the thought behind the sentence. If the thought can be broken into smaller expressions, then do so. If the thought cannot be broken down without losing its overall appeal, then leave the sentence longer. This breaks up the grey space and gives the writing a rythm.
2007-10-13 11:08:58 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
When it was suddenly their turn to follow in the footsteps of their male forebears, Mark and Randy had no idea what lay ahead on their wilderness foray.
2007-10-13 12:27:33 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋