Living in a daze
is fine
Until you wake-up
& start to see
everything has
begun to change
And relaize that the World
waits for absolutly
NO ONE
2007-10-12 16:14:41 · 6 answers · asked by octobrrbabii 2 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
Well, your version of this often repeated quote is pretty good, but still it is an often repeated quote.
'The world waits for no one' is the original quote. You only added to the original quote a little. Still, not bad.
2007-10-12 16:23:20 · answer #1 · answered by Doc Watson 7 · 3⤊ 0⤋
I think of that moment when I realise I am stuck in auto-pilot, it has potential if you change the emphasis on certain words, I found a good site last night that shows a bit about how to do that, I will see if I can find the link for you cause I would love to see what you could do with it.
2007-10-12 23:39:04 · answer #2 · answered by cheeky_lil_pixiegirl 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Nice.
A few details...
Why is wake-up hyphenated and why is world capitalized and why is no one in all caps?
2007-10-13 01:12:14 · answer #3 · answered by Nathan D 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Odd words.
2007-10-12 23:24:02 · answer #4 · answered by . 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
trite, hackneyed and cliche.
2007-10-13 01:00:04 · answer #5 · answered by cannon_primed 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
ah that is good and inspiring !
2007-10-13 00:44:35 · answer #6 · answered by Dewi S 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋