I'm having a writers block. I need help writing a poem about this girl. Heres the ryhimng pattern:
A / B / A
Here's what I have so far:
Her eyes are an icy blue
The most beautiful color
I have ever knew
Her smile brightens up the day
Its more than enough
To take my stress away
I could say much more
About this Irish girl
??????????????
For the 3rd stanza, if you want to switch up what I have so far, thats fine, but I want to keep the part about her being irish in it. KEEP IT CLEAN!
2007-10-12 12:01:36 · 11 answers · asked by Patrick 2 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
Keep it serious too, I like this girl, k?
2007-10-12 12:06:53 · update #1
One more thing: It has to follow the ryhming pattern.
2007-10-12 12:12:05 · update #2
Well, alot of you are saying That I need another verse before I finish it up, well, like i said I'm in a writers block... I don't like using other peoples work... But maybe a little help to get me started on that as well?
2007-10-12 12:23:09 · update #3
Well, okay heres what she looks like: She has pale skin, STUNNINGLY light blue eyes, kinda short, amazing light blue eyes, dark brownish blackish hair, beautiful light blue eyes, freckles...
And did I mention her goergous light blue eyes?
2007-10-12 14:19:27 · update #4
Her eyes are an icy blue
The most beautiful color I ever knew
Her smile brightens up the day
It always takes my stress away
This Irish girl I do admire
Because she sets my heart afire
Hows that?!?! Good luck.
2007-10-12 12:18:57 · answer #1 · answered by Corona 5 · 1⤊ 1⤋
hmmm lets see you could say
Her eyes the color of pure blue
The most beautiful stunning color
i came to veiw
her smiles brightens up my day
its more enough to say
which always takes my breath away
I could say much more
about this irish girl
whom of which i most adore
yo i did that in like a second that poem pwns. lol.
the poems so cute hop ethe girl loves it!
2007-10-12 12:07:56 · answer #2 · answered by WestLand 5 · 0⤊ 1⤋
How about...
I could say much more
About this Irish girl
She makes my spirit soar
2007-10-12 12:09:26 · answer #3 · answered by Tricia 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I could say so much more
About this Irish girl
She is in my heart, for sure.
2007-10-13 02:04:48 · answer #4 · answered by q-tip 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
You need to change the 3rd line-It is not correct English. How about : Lovely to view
Also your 5th and 6th line doesn't flow-how about
Its enough to take
My breath away
Last line could be:who as you can tell, I adore...
and then you need 3 more lines before you end it. Good Luck!
2007-10-12 12:16:57 · answer #5 · answered by cookiemonster 5 · 0⤊ 1⤋
I will say this much more
this Irish girl
I could write score after score .
My world is her kingdom
her light and life
is my true source of wisdom
2007-10-12 12:14:38 · answer #6 · answered by Suicide642 5 · 2⤊ 1⤋
Being filled in her beauty makes my spirit soar
omg.. someone already said that :-(
how about
Your soul is so beautiful, it's like an open door.
⥠beautiful poem , she will be blown away!
2007-10-12 12:13:46 · answer #7 · answered by ******* 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
we cant give anything cuz we dont know what she looks like....so we can just say something about her then.....
ummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm....................................................................
in a crowded room shes the only one i see
i can explain her in 2 words
shes the nicest and prettiest girl to me
when she walks up the hall
i try to talk to her
but i end up hiding next to the wall
shes the best girl ever
in my place she is
hate her? i could never
i love her smile
when i see her
i stare at her for a while
thats all i got.....hope ya like it
2007-10-12 14:11:56 · answer #8 · answered by ? 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
She simply sets my heart a whirl
2007-10-12 12:09:43 · answer #9 · answered by Lynn H 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
girl you take my breathe away
2007-10-12 12:11:13 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋