I know that this isn't a question, but Im hoping that by some dumb luck my sister will see this and contact me...
Sorry if any of you don't approve..
Incomplete
I have found that the joy from my world,
has been taken from me...ripped away and I
miss you and your laugh ..
The way you always found a way to bring
happiness to me...the way you advised me..
I have a hole in my spirit and wander the world aimless.
Missing you and wondering if you will ever return to us...
I would fight a thousand ...i would travel bitter cold..
I would search the universe...
to have one more conversation with you..
my sweet, sweet sister.
I miss you.
Kiel
2007-10-12 09:41:03 · 12 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
Thanks you all for the kind words...it has been a struggle and I guess I got overwhelmed today...thank you all
2007-10-12 09:50:28 · update #1
Dear Kiel,
Your words speak volumes of what a wonderful and loving person you must be. I hope your sister comes to the same realization. She is very fortunate. Whatever the reasons behind your separation it should not have caused you this much pain. You have displayed a great deal of courage today in sharing this work with complete strangers. May your courage continue to see you through this difficult period as well.
Sincerely and respectfully,
Alan K.
2007-10-12 12:20:24 · answer #1 · answered by Alan K 5 · 5⤊ 0⤋
Kiel, your poem was truly beautiful and heart wrenching. I find writing poems helps with letting out my emotions and feelings. Take care of yourself and I hope and pray everything turns out well for you and your family.
2016-04-08 05:44:08 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Kiel my thoughts and prayers are with you and your family during this difficult time. Don't give up hope on her returning home safe and sound. If she does see this I hope that she knows that she is loved not only by you but by all of us here on Answers.
2007-10-13 04:35:30 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
That is very sweet. Maybe you should post her photo here, lots of people come to this site, and maybe someone will have some information.
I hope she is alright and you find her!
2007-10-12 09:52:22 · answer #4 · answered by Llani 5 · 3⤊ 0⤋
No critique on this today.
Kiel,
If I where your sister and came across this poetic plea, I would reach back out to you as you so sorely reached for me.
May it touch her heart as it did for me.
Peace & Love,
Sam
2007-10-12 18:22:20 · answer #5 · answered by Sam 4 · 2⤊ 0⤋
I hope you find her. Good luck on your search!
2007-10-12 09:50:18 · answer #6 · answered by grace 3 · 2⤊ 0⤋
Good luck, Kiel, and all the best. I love the title, "Incomplete", it says it all.
2007-10-12 10:07:32 · answer #7 · answered by Lady Annabella-VInylist 7 · 2⤊ 0⤋
Kiel, good luck on finding her.
2007-10-12 09:49:41 · answer #8 · answered by hotvw1914cc 6 · 2⤊ 0⤋
that is beautiful Keil i hope for all the luck in world you find her
2007-10-12 12:45:27 · answer #9 · answered by Krissy 2 · 2⤊ 0⤋
good luck , i hope she finds her way back to you god bless xx lovely poem so sad xx
2007-10-12 09:52:10 · answer #10 · answered by ♥BEX♥ 7 · 3⤊ 0⤋