revenge
By burden of blood
We know who we are
Blood ties are forsaken
And grudges still found
These scars were inflicted
Many generations ago.
So deep is the blood,
Ages come, ages go.
A snake in the grass
With no honor, no soul.
Left in my council,
You'll learn to respect.
Try as you might to slip away,
Try to escape without feeling pain..
I've lost all control,
While you lose your mind.
What is inside,
The abyss of the mind.
Pleasures domination,
Or forbidden imagination?
2007-10-12 09:09:37 · 10 answers · asked by The Dark Prince 3 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
Yay!!!! Baby!!!! Love it!!!
Love you
Mrs. Enrici
2007-10-12 10:18:37 · answer #1 · answered by . 5 · 0⤊ 1⤋
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2016-12-14 15:47:13 · answer #2 · answered by ? 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I especially liked the last stanza. But the whole poem is great. Who are those generations at war with one another, is it something from your personal history?
2007-10-12 21:15:29 · answer #3 · answered by Analyst 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
yay definately.
the last stanza was my favorite,
"What is inside,
The abyss of the mind.
Pleasures domination,
or forbidden imagination?"
amazing job big brother.
love,
your little sister,
Kara
2007-10-13 03:47:22 · answer #4 · answered by Kara P 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Not as good as some you've done, better than some, but still good. The only other thing I can say is this; "Buy the bus"!
2007-10-12 10:08:22 · answer #5 · answered by Dondi 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i like how you spell
don't like how you write
your story is failed
and you lyrics are quiet
i've found not some insight
and lost your paths truth
there wasn't a purpose
this poems in its youth
2007-10-12 10:21:03 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
yay
2007-10-12 10:17:56 · answer #7 · answered by ♥LuV my preppyness♥ 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i would say yes very nice and all your words make it all come together so great ..
2007-10-13 04:34:39 · answer #8 · answered by Cami lives 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
thats fantastic.
2007-10-12 09:33:48 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
umm wow
NAYYY
2007-10-12 09:18:37 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 2⤋