I am doing my CV at the moment and this is what I have put for the introduction and I don’t like it what else could I put instead?? With using what I put just said differently? Can some one help me
I enjoy spending time with my family and friends, I am currently at college, I am looking for a part time job, I have listed some of my good points below
cheerful and friendly person, who is reliable and trustworthy. I am keen to learn new skills I am Young open-minded, good at time keeping, very trustworthy,
Hard working and loyal, organized, reliable.
2007-10-12 05:35:10 · 7 answers · asked by Anonymous in Business & Finance ➔ Small Business
i think you have wrote "Iam" too many times, try to make it sound more like a story, remeber you are wrting it so the emplyers like you.
i enjoy spnding quality time with my friends and family, i am currently studying...... at college but am also looking for a part time job. iam keen 2 learn new things as i am a very hardworking and trustworthy person, im loyal, and organized and good at time keeping, im young but i am also very open minded and outgoing.
hows that sound?
2007-10-12 05:41:46 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Well, this is a simple draft I can roughly help you out with
I'm currently a college student studying in (your college's name) and I've achieved many academic qualifications throughout my course of education. I'm able to organise my time and I know how to set my priorities straight. I am an open-minded and keen learner, and I'm not afraid of facing challenges. I'm also willing to work hard towards my goals.
I'm a sociable person who is able to keep track of my personal life and my work properly. Spending time with my family and friends is a very fulfilling and enjoyable past-time of mine.
Your intro in a CV should be mostly about who you are, where have you studied before, etc. The gist of the CV would be about your character and your interpersonal skills, how you're willing to work hard and being an eager learner, etc.
While the last part would be your academic achievements and other achievements you have so far, for example, won a competition, but it's best you keep it related to the job you're applying to.
GLHF
2007-10-12 13:04:35 · answer #2 · answered by Soaring 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Lose everything except "College student looking for a full time job. Hard working, loyal, organized and reliable. Ready to start"
The rest is just too much fluff.
Dont use the "I" word if you can help it.
2007-10-12 12:40:13 · answer #3 · answered by crocolyle10 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I would leave some of your statements out.
Here is my rework:
Motivated, trustworthy, and reliable college student seeking part time employment.
Other qualities include organized, loyal, cheerful and open minded.
2007-10-12 12:41:47 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
Too many commas n description abt ur character. Too informal n personal. Get a good english reader n write a CV in a simple, FORMAL and organized manner
2007-10-12 12:39:56 · answer #5 · answered by Atieno 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Aside from your multiple grammatical errors, which appears to be a homework assignment for an English class, very few employers have the time to read autobiographies.
If you are serious, then I strongly recommend that you go to your local library and check-out books on resume writing.
P.S. This question belongs in the "Home > Business & Finance > Careers & Employment" section.
2007-10-12 12:46:56 · answer #6 · answered by skaizun 6 · 0⤊ 1⤋
it might be more appropriate to list your work wants and qualifications first then your family life. this would make you seem work orriented.
2007-10-12 12:45:51 · answer #7 · answered by loveablewarlock4u 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋