i'm writing a essay on the story called "the Flowers" by Alice Walker. i just need some help how to make those paragraphs good enough to give me a good grade. plz help!!!!
2007-10-09 11:18:53 · 12 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
i put this question in a diferent category.
2007-10-09 11:22:36 · update #1
intro- try to begin with dialogue DO NOT TELL US WHAT YOU ARE WRITING ABOUT!!! its boring!
conclusion- wrap it up... loop it
EX intro- “Being one of the only girls in a neighborhood full of guys is a tough job. You have a reputation to uphold! It’s kind of like that song ‘You can do anything, I can do better’ since I am the type of person that gets a little competitive. No matter what the guys were doing, whether it be tackle football, basketball, baseball or Smear the Queer , I was always there winning. We mostly played Smear the Queer though.”, I explained to Dr. Stevens, my orthopedic sports doctor.
conclusion (wrap up the story) - Six week passed and I was back on the court playing basketball. I made a speedy recovery and was also able to play in the tournament. To this day I still can’t do certain work outs like lunges, squats, or dips, but as long as I can play basketball it doesn’t really matter. I learned that I do have to put some restrictions on what I can and can’t do to my joints, which everyone should, and I wouldn’t have realized that without my injury.
2007-10-09 11:25:24 · answer #1 · answered by Dysheika 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋
In the introduction, give a brief overview of what you'll be saying within your essay... and remember to state the facts of the story. With an introduction, you want the reader to continue reading... so make it sound interesting. In the ending paragraph, bring everything together with a conclusion that states what your opinion was about the story overall. With the ending, you'll want to sum up the entire story and make it sound intriguing... make the reader anxious to read the story for themself.
2007-10-09 11:30:34 · answer #2 · answered by Ang 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Your introduction should provide some background information on whatever topic you are writing on. You are then going to transition into the body paragraphs. The conclusion should restate some of the information found in the paper (introduction and body) but also have new material that ties everything together (and sums everything together).
2007-10-09 11:23:52 · answer #3 · answered by Psychgurl 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋
The story should tell you were to go and how to start, and end the essay. Just remember to make the intro interesting and the closing fully support the body of the essay.
2007-10-09 11:24:41 · answer #4 · answered by zipper 7 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Your ending sentence should never say "and now since you havelearned about" its just wrong. It should also alk about some of the same topics as the begginning paragraph.Lastly you should never make a ending sentence with less than 4 sentences
2007-10-09 11:25:38 · answer #5 · answered by blessing 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Always tie in your last paragraph to the first paragraph
2007-10-09 11:21:20 · answer #6 · answered by Ink Corporate 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
google stuff like paragraph introduction and essay tips..there are probably many sites that can help you
2007-10-09 11:21:07 · answer #7 · answered by Top Contributor 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Wrong category.
But intro- tells about what you're about to write about.
Ending: Concludes the paragraph, and transitions to the next one.
2007-10-09 11:20:51 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
INTRO:
Author/Title
1-2 sentence summary
brief summary of what you will talk about
END:
summarize what you have written
restate back to your purpose
your thoughts
HOPE I HELPED!
2007-10-09 11:24:30 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 1⤋
shouldn't this be in the education category?
2007-10-09 11:26:45 · answer #10 · answered by 乂 4 · 0⤊ 2⤋