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Tall Tales

I am the perfect liar
So i'll be the perfect friend
I'll be the perfect daughter
And i'll write the perfect end
I will tell you what you like
Each word you want to hear
I'll tell you that you're beautiful
That you are fine and dear
I will show you shining stars
And lakes so clear and blue
Things that take your breath away
If only they were true...
I am the perfect liar
And i faked a perfect show
I lied to you, and all the rest
I sank so very low
I lied to God, and made a pledge
One that i couldnt keep
I swore i'd never lie again
A promise i can't keep
I'll lie again, and tell tall tales
Until my face turns blue
I'll lie just like i always have
'Till all these tales turn true

2007-10-09 07:10:30 · 9 answers · asked by Mary 4 in Society & Culture Other - Society & Culture

9 answers

So I'm not beautiful? I've always thought your calves far too chunky....so there. I see you haven't lost the attraction with Smurfs "Until your face turns blue" I like a girl with a fetish. x

2007-10-10 03:23:28 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0 0

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2016-10-06 09:22:02 · answer #2 · answered by ? 4 · 0 0

Do you really expect me to believe that?
Good job, reads well, sounds good. Couple of hiccups rhyming the same or too similar words, but good anyways.

2007-10-09 09:20:27 · answer #3 · answered by Dondi 7 · 0 0

It's good, but I don't particularly value falseness. I'd rather know someone for who they really are

2007-10-09 08:44:51 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0 0

Haha, I like it! Nice title too.

2007-10-09 21:14:18 · answer #5 · answered by milky s 4 · 0 0

i like it... i thought it was really good. but personally i would stop lying lol but i understand the poem.

2007-10-09 07:19:30 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0 0

WOW that is what I call a poem. That was wonderful.

2007-10-09 09:03:50 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0 0

It is pretty good !!
and Sounds like some my ex girlfriends.....

2007-10-09 07:26:54 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0 0

i think its really good! i really liked it! you should keep on writing poems their great.

2007-10-09 10:13:24 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 0 0

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