" Purchase my passion.
My experience, my skill, and my abilities will be given as a free gift. "
Does it make sense to you guys?
I'm making a sentence...for presentation that expressing myself to interviewer.
And..i wanna express that...
if they purchase (hire) my passion, they wil get my experience, my skills and my abilities as a free thing...or gift whatever..
What is proper expression for..expressing that last part of the sentence.."free gift"
2007-10-09 02:49:17 · 2 answers · asked by chanz 1 in Education & Reference ➔ Words & Wordplay
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hey skaizun
what is the real question?
I'm korean and i wanna learn proper
expressionn in English. That's why i'm posting my question in here.
Is that a big problem?
what's the matter with you?
2007-10-09 03:55:51 · update #1
just take out the word free, or change free gift to token....also, this is a great sentence - actually 2 sentences - but i would think that skills and abilites are the same thing so why not change abilities to something like "charm"...so this having been said, your sentence would read "Purchase my passion, and my experience, my skill, and my charm, will be received as a gift."....the words free and gift should not be used together as it is commonly understood that gifts are generally free already
2007-10-09 03:05:55 · answer #1 · answered by cookiesmom 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
You need to use real "questions", or you'll find that many people who might have been able to help you will just ignore the inane question. Your choice.
Also, avoid text messaging and extraneous characters/smileys/etc.
2007-10-09 03:48:22 · answer #2 · answered by skaizun 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋