2007-10-08 13:00:59 · 22 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
we live our lives as an oozing slouch,
lets drop the remote and get off that couch!
we can't walk to the neigbors because it's so far
so to 2 blocks we need a car.
Lets eat less and exercise more,
we can do it if we are united
We'll loose the blubbler, the thys of rubber
and our spouses will be delighted!
(what can I say)
2007-10-08 13:05:41 · answer #1 · answered by Fancy That 6 · 4⤊ 0⤋
as i heard the car door slam
and my hopes were on being united once again
i stood up from the couch and wiped a tear
i noticed a single box on the curb with a note reading dear
we are over
its all done
theirs no more to it
the magic is gone
i left you thing
not daring to come in
for fear id fall into your trap again
im sorry for the wasted time
both of ours yours and mine
just when you decide its time to talk
ill be there but only to walk
i dont really need to look in the past
because the past will never last
im ready to move on to a different life style
and i hope you know between you and me is a million miles
i love poetry can you place right back and tell me what you think
2007-10-08 13:08:03 · answer #2 · answered by willflip4ever 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
As I sat upon my couch, looking at a star,
I wondered if I left my money sitting in the car.
I went to see if it was there, hoping that it was,
And on the street I met a man dusting off some fuzz.
We talked awhile, he was so sweet, and then he had to leave,
He seemed to be so sincere, I really do believe.
That was six some months ago, and now I am so happy,
United with the man I love, I know it sounds so sappy.
2007-10-08 22:41:32 · answer #3 · answered by wolflady 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋
United we make love just we two
On the couch sticking as glue
Then off to the car in a hurry
I took my pill today- no need to worry!
2007-10-08 13:11:04 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
Driving in the car listening to the news radio
Alert! Alert! breaking news!
A commercial air craft just flew into the north world trade center tower!!!!!!
Now a second plane struck the south tower!!!!!!
Oh my god!
Panic, cries, screams of agony!
I rush home finding my brother writhing in tears on the couch.
We watch devastatingly to the pain.
United Airline flight 93
highjacked, crashed into a field in pennsylvania
four flights all highjacked September 11th, numerous lives lost in this war
2007-10-08 13:07:14 · answer #5 · answered by jessi 2 · 2⤊ 0⤋
This is crap,
my parents won't let me drive
A 16 year old and a car
I think the world will survive.
So I maybe left my homework
to sit inside the fridge
and put my shoes in the couch
I tend to forget a smidge
But cm'on the car's important
this is the united states,
where else will I be able
to make out with my dates?
oops...
2007-10-08 13:09:31 · answer #6 · answered by igoh900 5 · 3⤊ 1⤋
Went to the bar in my car. United we fighted. Sat my sore pouch on the couch.
2007-10-08 13:03:57 · answer #7 · answered by Repo Man 2 · 2⤊ 0⤋
In my united house hold objects i see,
a car that lies in the garages,
a couch in the living room,
and yet clutter in the basement.
I know that was odd, but at least I gave it a try!
2007-10-08 13:04:25 · answer #8 · answered by Kenz 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
We united is a gift
Not unlike the long awaited car
But we sit on the couch, not getting too far.
2007-10-08 13:03:46 · answer #9 · answered by That'sINTENSE! 4 · 4⤊ 0⤋
United, we sit on the Couch.
A car crashed outside..
Ouch!
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We're making love in the car -ouch!-, we're making love on the couch too. This may not be a poem, but as you say it should be, it is good!
2007-10-08 20:22:12 · answer #10 · answered by Alice in Wonderbra 7 · 3⤊ 0⤋