What should I name my poem?

Question

You just sit there, staring into space
Oblivious to everyone and everything,
People just ignore you and walk further away.
Watching squirrels play and the birds sing.

You're wondering about anything, religion, life
Why you even bothered to wake up this morning,
Ending your blissfull dreams of peace and hope,
Of mermaids swimming, and dragons soaring.

Every day, you sit there in the same place,
Thinking about your family and dreams,
How your parents divorce is killing you inside,
Nobody but you can hear all your screams.

One lie turns into another, getting bigger and bigger
You unfortuneatly learned this the hard way
Creating wounds that will eventually fade to scars,
But sadly, they won't ever,ever go away.

You're confused in this huge, horrid world of ours
Seeing nothing but tears and blood, and feeling pain.
You hear babies crying, mothers screaming at fathers
And many other kids crying outside in the cold rain.

You think to yourself, "Why is our world this way?"
Sadly, some people just honestly don't care.
Destroying this world, piece by piece, without a thought.
This eath is being tortured and it isn't fair.

Suicide bombers and crazed gun-men around every corner,
Innocent people dying every single day.
We're in way too deep in this terrible, terrible war.
Families praying that they're okay.

People wish desprately for world peace,
Sadly their wishes won't come true.
There will always be something wrong,
Hunger, disease, and murder too.

This is what we've created, and this is what we must live with,
People will die trying to change it,
Protesting and signing millions of petitions,
Trying to put out all the fires we've lit.

They say time heals all wounds,
But sadly, you know they weren't right
But to disagree, would start an argument,
Which would lead to another fight.

You tried your best, but now you're dying
There's not much more you can do.
But you fought really long and hard,
That much is oh, so very true.

Answer 1

"Dreams Die Hard"

Answer 2

dust off the junk that is holding you back from being a happy, positive impact on this world!
Get up! I know you can...because girl...a whole lot of hell has happened in my life and I'm telling you to do exactly what I have done to "make a difference in life."

Answer 3

Lady Michelle,
Great poem and really describes the world we live in these days.
You need to rise above it, instead of getting under the circumstance...
Yes, life all around can get you down, and turn your smile into a frown.
One thing I do know is that you are taking the faults of others and making them your faults.
Truth be told...you didn't do it.
You look old enough to be able to make good decisions for you.
The bad in this world is there and will always be there in increasing amounts because it believes it is immortal.
So rise above. What is it that you want to do in life? What is it that you want to be in life? How can you put a positive impact on this world? That is what you should be concentrating on when all around you is falling down.
My life growing up was worse than hell itself and things in between as an adult happened also, however, it has not stopped me from becoming all I can become, or doing all I can do to make a difference in this world for me and for others!
Stop the pity party for the down fall of those who have failed you and your expectations.
Get up and become better than them! You are worth more than all the bad decisions made by others! What they have done to themselves or to this world IS NOT YOUR FAULT!
So STOP making their misfortunes your game in life.
The way you get recognized in life these days is to do something different than what everyone else is doing.
Find something positive to do. Positive is hardly happening because most people are in this downward spiral of hell bent selfishness!
You need to get up and dust off the junk that is holding you back from being a happy, positive impact on this world!
Get up! I know you can...because girl...a whole lot of hell has happened in my life and I'm telling you to do exactly what I have done to "make a difference in life."

Answer 4

so very sad

you write very well

my world isn't like that at all

you need a beer and someone to hold you I think

try to make your house or apartment nice, then slowly make your daily experience safe and comfy too, maybe stop reading the paper

Answer 5

wow. i must say, that's very deep. theres so many things you could call it. im sure you want something really creative... how aboutt........

1.The fires we've lit
2.Another day, another fight
3.What we've created
4.the world today
5.what's happening?
6. "Touched"
7. Confused
8. Do you still care?

good luck! btw i reallyyyyy like your poem. && i hope i gave you some good ideas.... =]

Answer 6

Self Proclamation

You have a typo, Eath should be Earth, I think.

Answer 7

Oblivious wow and your rele talented thats a great poem yuo should write another won great job!

Answer 8

How about "Futility"?

BTW, just because your parents are getting a divorce doesn't mean that they don't both love you very much. You should talk to someone about how you're feeling.

Answer 9

My Point of View
TheTruth of Life
Life's Truthes

Answer 10

I would personally name it "Reality" or "How Life Goes"
something relating to what the poem is about. Its a very good poem i must say.

Answer 11

Listen, you have talent and deep thinking, you can write and I like your poem from an entertainment perspective. I can really relate to it.

But let me tell you two things.


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And most important - there is a thing called the ether, your a smart girl you better research that! You are only contributing to the suffering, and creating of a horrid world.

Also let me now say anyone who says it is world truth are so far from the truth.