I'm having a little trouble starting my college essay. I was thinking I could start off saying how I used to be very shy and then explain how a life-changing event has made me more outgoing and has taught me the value of communication. Do you think this is a bad idea because I am highlighting my flaws or is it good because it has shown how I have changed?
2007-10-07 08:22:40 · 2 answers · asked by The Kristin 1 in Education & Reference ➔ Higher Education (University +)
Yes -- bad idea.
Start with the life changing revelation & then tell them that you were shy until that happened. Never bury the lead.
2007-10-07 09:36:07 · answer #1 · answered by Ranto 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
nicely its a great commence for a tale yet you attempt to electrify the faculty which you will be area of their student physique...they don't care which you awaken at 5am to get waiting to take a seat on your kitchen all day. Introduce your self not your way of existence and not your time table. "I certainly have come to realize that being domicile schooled has unquestionably had an surprising result on my love of gaining knowledge of" this is sweet enhance on that and why you're arranged for a dorm room and lecture halls finished of people. the way you comprehend you will excel!
2016-10-06 06:32:21 · answer #2 · answered by ? 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋