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My teacher assigned a 10 sentence essay. I was left with 4 run ons in the 10 sentences. If you can help me make these sentences not run ons, but still keep them 1 sentence. I would appreciate it very much!

Run on 1
Oedipus learns that he is "not [his] fathers son" from a drunken man, Oedipus's anger gets in the way of rejecting what was said and soon he "[Feels] anger" and "[seeks] revenge."
Run on 2
After realizing his prohecy Oedipus leaves Corinth with hopes to avoid the prophecy, ironically this leads to him murdering his father on his journey to Thebes.
Run on 3
Oedipus becomes King of Thebes after solving the riddle of the Sphinx, then marries his widowed mother, and finds out his true identity, this provokes him to take his sight by blinding himself.
Run on 4
Oedipus expierences reversal once he flees from Corinth to a land where "[he] should never see evil." Oedipus leaving started the prophecy by killing his father and marrying his mother.

2007-10-07 01:48:42 · 2 answers · asked by yourstruly 2 in Education & Reference Homework Help

2 answers

Run on 1
Oedipus learns that he is "not [his] fathers son" from a drunken man and his reaction overpowers what was said and soon he "[Feels] anger" and "[seeks] revenge."
Run on 2
After realizing his prophecy Oedipus leaves Corinth with hopes to avoid it which, ironically, leads to him murdering his father on his journey to Thebes.
Run on 3
Oedipus becomes King of Thebes after solving the riddle of the Sphinx, marries his widowed mother, and on discovering his true identity, is provoked into blinding himself.
Run on 4
Oedipus experiences reversal once he flees from Corinth to a land where "[he] should never see evil." thus starting the prophecy by killing his father and marrying his mother.

2007-10-07 01:59:37 · answer #1 · answered by quatt47 7 · 0 0

The easiest way to prevent run-ons is actually a very simple process.

Read the sentence out like if you were speaking it to someone, and when you would naturally stop and breath, place a comma there. If it is a place you would make a full stop place a period.

Yes, your sentences are run ons, however some of them should be made into more then one sentence.

For Example: After realizing his prohecy, Oedipus leaves Corinth with hopes to avoid the prophecy. Ironically, this leads to him murdering his father on his journey to Thebes.

2007-10-07 02:05:34 · answer #2 · answered by unknown friend 7 · 0 0

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