I wrote this earlier this morning since I couldn't sleep:
Intricate silk threads,
Spiraling Kaleidoscope,
The Spiders Webbing.
© 7/10/07.
2007-10-06 18:59:04 · 5 answers · asked by ♆Şрhĩņxy - Lost In Time. 7 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
*'s I added it hehe.
2007-10-06 20:06:18 · update #1
Aww thankyou everyone you're all very sweet.
♥
2007-10-08 06:00:37 · update #2
Because so many tend to over-explain their emotions when writing poetry most poets stay away from Haiku. The ancient art of saying more with less, when well done, is beautiful.
This, my friend, is both beautiful and well done.
(Insert the comma in the word Spider's. Make it perfect.)
2007-10-06 20:04:31 · answer #1 · answered by Doc Watson 7 · 4⤊ 0⤋
Decided to come up with a quick response---writing a mini-story out of haiku can be fun.
Struggling Butterfly
Flailing Flapping Wings, Feet Glued,
Silk Cocoon of Doom.
(c) 2007, Paul J. Doyle. All Rights Reserved.
2007-10-08 06:59:22 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
Hi,
Beautiful. So much conveyed in 17 syllables. You've got me interested in finding out more about Haiku now. Thank you.
Pollyanna
2007-10-07 06:35:21 · answer #3 · answered by pollyanna 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Thats really clever!
I love the Spiraling Kaleidoscope line, its creative and is full of imagery in just two words...
Wow!
:)
2007-10-07 04:46:07 · answer #4 · answered by Amanda// 2 · 2⤊ 0⤋
thats really cool and creative i love it keep up the good work
2007-10-07 02:14:41 · answer #5 · answered by star lover 3 · 1⤊ 1⤋